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Hello hi mico. How are you? Good, good, I'm good. Thank Oh, I just want to say I'm good. Thank you. But good, good that you're good. My nais, Lily, and we are going to be doing some English together. Arenme, let me get it up. I'm just going to check if I'm supposed to mark any homework of yours or anything. I'm not sure. No, I can't see anything. So that's fine. So where do you live in Rico and what part of the world? England Walton. Oh, you live in England. Wow. That makes sense why we're doing our lesson at this time then because I was a bit confused because most of my students are in China or Japan. So I was thinking, Goff, it's gonna to be really early in the morning for Enrico and we're doing this lesson, but that's because you're in England. Are you liking it in England? Yeah, but it's very dark and cold at the minute, isn't it? And that's not very fun. Okay, so. This is the lesson I've been sent for us to do today, which is reading and writing relative clauses and adverbials. I'm not sure have you done any of these lessons with any other teachers or something in Rico? I'm just wondering why I was starting at lesson three. Oh, I have done done to before already. Okay, that makes sense then. Good. So. Did you have time to do this homework? Did you get to set this homework at all? Do you recognize this? Yes. Yeah. We will just move on from it if someone sends it to me or if you finish it, we'll have a look at it then, but we'll just leave it for now. So what we're looking at today is relative clauses. So do you recognize that term, a relative clause? Have you heard of these before in Rico? Yes, Yeah what can you tell me about relative clauses? Red clath and the example of a reclath is the vathe hornet who had a large head ate A B. The not head is a relative close. Okay. Can you tell me why is it a relative clause? I already quote adinformation to the subject. Yeah, Yeah. To the noun. Good. Really good. That's what it says here in additional detail about a noun, we can add a relative clause. Good. So instead of having two simple sentences, we can like for example here, can you read this example for me in Rico? Stareating roasted chicken and this way her favorite meal good. Instead of having a sentence like that, we can instead make one bigger clause, a conflict sentence that's got a relative clause in it so we can change it to be, Sarah is eating roast chicken, which is her favite meal. I went too far. So a relative clause is connected to the main clause by a relative pronoun. So we've replaced it. It is her favorite meal with the relative pronoun which to make it, which is her favorite meal. So this is the relative pronoun and this starts the relative clause there like that. Yeah thatmake sense. Yeah, good. Do you want to read what it says on this slide for me? Rotor call always starts with a rpronoun and someone relative pronouns or who's which you that too. Good. So in these sentences in Rico, if I give you the pen, do you think you can circle or highlight or underline, however you want to do it? The relative pronouns in those sentences for me? So we've got which who who's who perfect. Well done. Oh, and I missed one at the bottom. Don't just do that one on the bottom before me as well, because I missed it off by accident. Sorry about that. Yeah, good that. Okay. So do you know can you tell me, Enrico, where we can put a relative flause in a sentence? You can place a relative call after. The middle offers Penns. Anywhere else? In the front of it can be a subordinin a. Yeah. So we're maybe talking about where they can be placed. So you set it in the middle, but we can also put them at the end as well. So if you have a look at these sentences, we can see that they're coming in the end ops in the middle end, middle, middle. They can go in the middle or at the end. They can't go at the start of a sentence. They have to be embedded. They have to be you know within a sentence or at the end. Okay, so a bit of a writing task for you to do for me next. This one now says, can you write so maybe just one sentence for each picture and I want them to have an embedded relative clause. So what that means is one like this where the relative clause is coming in the middle of the sentence. That's what embedded means. Yeah so you have a go for me and we can can you do it on the board so that I can see it as well, if that's possible? Okay, good. I'm just going to add in your capital letters at the start. I can see you've got your full stops. That's great. Got our capital letters. So we've got the children who were very tall, road bikes, very good. And the cat who love to eat rats, find a tree. Nice. Brilliant. So both of those using who? That's fine. Both embedded to. Well done. So the examples that you've given, do you want to read their examples out loud? For me, the children who own helmets are excited by their surtrithe cat, which was black and White goes the cuon, the tree. And that is not because cats and tigers can climb trees. They're very good at climbing trees, aren't they? Yeah for it's a bit silly that they've said it got stuff up a tree, but also this cat does look like it's a bit silck, doesn't it? Why is it sideways like that on the tree? Because it is looking for a mouth se hiding in the tree. Maybe. Yeah, maybe. Although you know what people do, you know what happens sometimes in Rico? Sometimes cats do get stuck on very high up places and people have to call the fire engine, the firefighters to come with their very big ladders so that they can get them down and they can rescue them. Happens all the time. I think it's quite funny. And some people say that that the cat is the tigers teacher because cat countries, tigers can, tigers can. But there's one thing that don't do that tigers do, and that is swimming. Oh Yeah, I hadn't really thought about that. Cats hate going in water, don't they? Yes, and tigers love water. That's funny actually, isn't it? Yeah. I wonder why that is. I wonder maybe because the tigers have to go in the water, but the cats, you know, they are sat on their chairs inside the house going, no, I don't need to do that. The tiger needs to do that. But I don't. Maybe that's why. And higers have a very necessary diet of fish. Well, cats, the hundreds more. Okay, right. What we also want to think about is if the information is essential, what does it mean if something is essential in Rico? Important. It's important. Exactly. So here we've got a sentence. Could you read it for me? Josie, who loves to play football, was pick for the country team. Good. So here the information given in this relative clause, it's an extra, isn't it? It's not essential or else can say non restrictive. Good. It means that we can use commas around that relative clause to show that we could remove it. We could just take it out like that, and the rest of the sentence should still work without it. Like Josie was picked for the county team. Okay. The next one we have you read it for me, a mirror from the missing cat hit that his neighbour had lost. A mirror from the missing cat. Good. Is the information involved ld, is this essential this time? No. It is actually essential because we do need it. It contains essential information. We need sort of that information. That's why we've removed the commas. So it's saying there might be lots of cats, but this was the missing cat that belonged to ame's neighbor. So Amir found the missing cat that his neighbor had lost. We want that you know important information. Okay. So this says decide whether these relative clauses are restrictive or non restrictive. So that just means essential or non essential. Add plumers where you think that you need them. This is. And R not restrictive. Yes. So we've got non restrictive, who is usually late, non restrictive, which had a huge farming wall. Children did run the dance show, which made their teacher happy. Yeah, good. That is restrictive. Nice. Okay. Oh, this is a picture. That's why I can't click next. Okay, same again, decide whether these relative clauses are restrictive or non restrictive add come as where you need them. Okay, let's have a look. So Yeah, that is restrictive here. This is non restrictive good. This is restrictive good. So whenever you can see that it's going to be restrictive, well, it can be. It's restrictive if it's thought of that basically, but that doesn't always have to be okay here. It says as well, we need sometimes we need to ask the question whether we even need a relative pronoun. So in a restrictive relative clause, it is possible to admit to remove the relative pronoun if it refers to the object of the sentence. So for example, Amer found the missing cats that his neighbor had lost. We could just write this as Amir found the missing cat his neighbor had lost. We can just remove that relative pronoun. Yeah, Yeah, I agree. So here it says, read the following sentences containing restrictive relative clauses and decide whether it is possible to emit the relative pronoun. So you read those and think, can I remove that pronoun? So which one's telling I don't know which one's telling me if you can remove or not. It is the last sentence. So the book like so the this one we could remove, is that what we're saying? The book I bought yesterday cost me three pounds. Yeah, the book I bought yesterday cost me three pounds, but this one, this first one we can also remove. Can you read it? The test we did yesterday was really easy. So that also makes sense without the pronoun, doesn't it? Yeah. So we can remove that one too. Okay, this says choose a square to reveal a hidden picture, write a relative clause sentence about the picture after, so you can choose Ellie, square and Rico. This one. Looks like you're using sing, all of them. I think the one was two. Spoon it. Okay? This one, Oh, a turtoa turtle, whatever you want to call it. So we'll do a few of these. So you can do it in the board for me. At the tortoys, who was slow, ate cabbage. Who is the relative pronoun? Yeah, good. So up there, don't forget that capital letter again, I'll add it there for you. Okay, we'll do another one. Choose another picture for me. Oh. Next sentence to write for me. Hey, the car crash. Okay. Does it make sense to say the car crash? Who is it? Car? Yes. Good. You want to edit that? Filme? Yeah. What does make sense for a car to be a who does it? Only an animal or a person really that would say who? I mean, really even an animal to be honest, we probably say which as well. But it's okay. So could you just correct it for me to be the right pronoun? Good. Okay, we'll do one more. So which was the third one youlike to do? Okay, this one with ms. S on it. Oh, an interesting different picture. There you go. Last one for me. Do use do we use who or which for. Which but it's not a person, is it? Yeah, cheese, not the type of cheese, not the type of person. Okay, the cheese just grated was put on a pizza. Yeah, nice. I guess we could maybe say like put on a pizza or something, but that's fine to be honest. Okay, let's see what next. Oh, we've got over quiz. Or you can just circle it for me. So for each sentence, identify the relative pronoun. Name of God. Oh, I. Now I got it a bit wrong. It's which the first okay, so just take that off. Yeah which which that too nice. Okay, this one says map the main clause to the appropriate relative clause. The cat scratched my arm, which made it sthe paddling pool is full of cold water, which is fabulous on a hot day. I have a sister, three each younger than me. The ambulance wito help the child. All the torthe cat scratched my arm was three. What have the child, which is fabulous on this whole. Would be funny, would you know if we didn't like that? Okay. Next one it says, can you break each relative clause sentence back down into two single clause simple sentences? I looked as much like my dad. Obviously these would be capital letters, wouldn't they? Whose hair is black too? Well, that one already is. Okay, same again with this one. Break each relative clause sentence back down to two single clause sentences. My rabbit. Yes. Hmm. Do you think that would be a sentence? My rabbit, there should just be two sentences. So how about we go for me, a rabbit who lost? Yeah. So just like that, my rabbit who look. Yeah because actually the who loves carrots is the extra information. So really it's they've changed it. They've taken all of this out and sort of moved it to the end. My rabbit always runs up to me when I go to its hutch. It loves carrots because remember, this is extra information here. We want to make it a single, you know if we want to make it a simple sentence, we need to make it its own thing. So have a go at this one for me. So have a little think, would that make sense as two sentences? Micah, whose legs were aching, finally completed the race. Doesn't quite make senses to sentences, does it? So we need to change these a little bit. Why don't you try and write out, write them out. So like what we did with the with this. It needs to change more than just putting a full stop in. Yeah, so in this example, you can see how they've changed it altogether. See if you can have a go at that for me as well with this sentence. Use that example at the top to help you. Yeah. Okay. Okay, so Micah finally completed the race. His legs, Yeah and you wouldn't even need to change the wording if you didn't want to. And just don't forget that tense. It would be his legs Worsaw. But you can keep it as aching. His legs were aching. You don't even need to change the the wording and take it that fire, leave it the same. Good. Okay, right now we are going to move on to some adverbials Enrico. So can you tell me what an adverbial is? 饼。Yeah. What's this? Part is abverbial. So part before the comma. Oh, okay. So that's like a fronted adverbial is what we call Yeah good. So it says, adverbial phrases are similar to adverbs. They describe an action using a short phrase and tell how something happened, when it happened, or where it happened or how often it happened. And it says adding detail to your writing will gain you more Marks for style and vocabulary. All writing needs detail in one form or another. This might be description, explanation, examples, etc. Averbial phrases will help you add to this. So here we've got some examples. Can you read these on the board for me? Now she ran to the Troas fast as her next. When in the middle of the night, she has no capital where the flag above the buildings in the way, often a week we did visit a different museum. So if the adverbial contains a verb, we call it an adverbial clause. So for example, in these sentences, whoops, we've got she opened the fridge looking for a snack. After he opened the safe, he looked around furtively. Standing on top of the hill, she screamed at the top of her lungs, these are adverbial clauses. Okay, so here's some tips. We want to notice how they can be placed in different parts of a sentence, either before or after the verb. And when in adverbulous place at the start of a sentence, it should be followed with a comma, just like what you did on the board a second ago. So this says add an anverbial phrase or clause to these sentences. So they don't always have to go at the start. They can go before or after the verb. So maybe we can do two at the front and then two in different places. So in these examples that we read. You know they're not all going at the start, are they? We've got these at the start, but other ones, you know that this one's at the end. This one's on the end. So you have a. Okay. So remember what I said, they don't all have to go at the start. So this last one could we put maybe after. X set has got A C after the x. Okay, but just don't forget that the adverbial so now got the feeling right needs to tell us maybe how, when, where or why the action happened. So accept me is actually telling us about the subject and not the verb. So it would need to be something like everybody opened their presents before breakfast. That would be a time, one year a when or everybody opened their presence in the living room. That would be aware. One. So don't forget, needs to be how. When. Where or why the verb? Remember, you're always adding different description to the verb. So see if you can just have another go at that one for me. Good. Yeah, that's better. So what I'm noticing is that we're really pupitent with how adverbs, these are all not how sorry these are all telling me when these are all time ones, sometime later in the night, half a second later before dinner. So what we might want to do in the future is the practice using some other adverbs, Yeah like telling us how or where or why not just when ones because we want to be able to use a range of them rather than just you know all one type. Okay, we're finished with this one here. Last thing to do, it says, can you add a relative clause to these sentences? Actually, I thought it was just going to be a matching up task, but. Oh, are you still? There we go. Maririco, you're still there. I can't see you anymore. Oh, there you go. Your back. Well, I think it was your WiFi. Okay, we'll just stop there and I'll just set your homework. I think we probably haven't got time. We've only got two minutes left. Okay. So your homework is it says write a story with the opening words as the clock struck to aim to use at least ten adverbials and four relative clauses in your story, highlight them when you are finished. So Enrico, it doesn't need to be a very long story. And also, I don't really mind if it's not the best story in the world. Yeah, it just I just want you to focus on using those adverbials and those relative clauses. That's the main focus. Yeah, I don't mind. You know I'm not going to be marking you on the actual story itself, just those parts there really. Yeah. So you have a week to do each homework Yeah so you've got into our next lesson to see if you can get that homework done for me if you get time. Okay. And Rico, we are all finished. It was lovely to meet you today. Thank you for working so hard. Hopefully, I'll see you again next week. I hope you enjoy your weekend. Yeah, thank you very much. Thank you. Bye bye.
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    "course_subtitle_en": "1v1 English Lesson - Relative Clauses and Adverbials",
    "course_subtitle_cn": "1对1 英语课程 - 关系从句和状语",
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            "en": "Understand the definition and function of relative clauses.",
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            "en": "Understand the definition and function of adverbials.",
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            "en": "Identify and use adverbial phrases and clauses to enhance writing.",
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            "description_cn": "问候,检查作业,并简要讨论学生所在地(英国)和当前天气。"
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            "description_cn": "学生根据图片写包含嵌入式关系从句的句子。"
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            "description_en": "Explaining the difference and adding commas for non-restrictive clauses. Practice identifying and adding commas.",
            "description_cn": "解释区别并为非限定性从句添加逗号。练习识别和添加逗号。"
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            "title_en": "Omitting Relative Pronouns",
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            "description_cn": "讨论在限定性从句中何时可以省略关系代词。"
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            "time": "70-80 min",
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            "time": "80-90 min",
            "title_en": "Matching and Sentence Decomposition",
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            "title_en": "Introduction to Adverbials",
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    "concepts_en": "Relative clauses add extra information about a noun. Restrictive clauses are essential for meaning; non-restrictive clauses provide extra, non-essential information and are set off by commas. Adverbials describe when, where, how, or how often an action occurs. They can be phrases or clauses and can be placed at the beginning, middle, or end of a sentence.",
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            "en": "Interactive whiteboard\/screen for explanations and student writing.",
            "cn": "用于讲解和学生书写的互动白板\/屏幕。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Pre-prepared slides or digital materials on relative clauses and adverbials.",
            "cn": "关于关系从句和状语的预备幻灯片或数字材料。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Picture prompts for writing exercises.",
            "cn": "用于写作练习的图片提示。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Online quiz or matching activities.",
            "cn": "在线测验或匹配活动。"
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            "en": "Enrico actively participated in discussions and answered questions.",
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        {
            "en": "He was willing to attempt all the exercises, even when unsure.",
            "cn": "他愿意尝试所有练习,即使不确定。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Demonstrated engagement by asking clarifying questions.",
            "cn": "通过提问以澄清疑问来展示参与度。"
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            "en": "Understood the core concepts of relative clauses and adverbials.",
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        },
        {
            "en": "Showed good understanding of the difference between restrictive and non-restrictive clauses.",
            "cn": "很好地理解了限定性从句和非限定性从句的区别。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Grasped the function of adverbials in adding detail.",
            "cn": "掌握了状语在添加细节方面起到的作用。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Needed some guidance on sentence structure when breaking down complex sentences.",
            "cn": "在分解复杂句子时,需要一些关于句子结构的指导。"
        }
    ],
    "oral_assessment": [
        {
            "en": "Enrico's spoken English was generally clear and understandable.",
            "cn": "Enrico 的口语英语总体清晰易懂。"
        },
        {
            "en": "He used target vocabulary related to the lesson.",
            "cn": "他使用了与课程相关的目标词汇。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Hesitations were noted, possibly due to formulating complex sentences.",
            "cn": "注意到了犹豫,可能是由于组织复杂句子的原因。"
        }
    ],
    "written_assessment_en": "Student's written output during the lesson (e.g., sentences on the board) showed correct application of relative clauses, though some minor corrections were needed for pronoun choice.",
    "written_assessment_cn": "学生在课上(例如,在板书上的句子)的书面输出显示了对关系从句的正确应用,尽管在代词选择方面需要一些小的修正。",
    "student_strengths": [
        {
            "en": "Good foundational understanding of grammar concepts.",
            "cn": "良好的语法概念基础。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Willingness to participate and try new tasks.",
            "cn": "乐于参与并尝试新任务。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Ability to identify grammatical structures when prompted.",
            "cn": "在提示时能够识别语法结构。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Good recall of previously learned material (having done lessons 1 and 2).",
            "cn": "对先前学过的材料记忆良好(已完成第 1 和第 2 课)。"
        }
    ],
    "improvement_areas": [
        {
            "en": "Consistent application of correct relative pronoun choice (e.g., 'who' vs. 'which' for objects).",
            "cn": "一致地应用正确的关系代词选择(例如,对象用'who'还是'which')。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Developing a wider range of adverbial types beyond just 'when'.",
            "cn": "发展除“何时”之外更广泛的状语类型。"
        },
        {
            "en": "More confident sentence construction when breaking down complex sentences.",
            "cn": "分解复杂句子时更自信的句子构建。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Ensuring correct punctuation, especially commas with non-restrictive clauses.",
            "cn": "确保正确的标点符号,特别是带非限定性从句的逗号。"
        }
    ],
    "teaching_effectiveness": [
        {
            "en": "The lesson was well-structured and covered the intended topics.",
            "cn": "课程结构良好,涵盖了预期的主题。"
        },
        {
            "en": "The use of examples and interactive exercises was effective.",
            "cn": "示例和互动练习的使用是有效的。"
        },
        {
            "en": "The teacher adapted well to the student's prior knowledge.",
            "cn": "教师很好地适应了学生先前的知识。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Clear explanations were provided for complex grammar points.",
            "cn": "对复杂的语法点提供了清晰的解释。"
        }
    ],
    "pace_management": [
        {
            "en": "The pace was generally appropriate, allowing for practice and explanation.",
            "cn": "节奏总体适宜,允许进行练习和讲解。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Some activities, like sentence decomposition, might have benefited from slightly more time or clearer examples.",
            "cn": "一些活动,如句子分解,可能需要更多时间或更清晰的示例。"
        },
        {
            "en": "The teacher managed transitions between topics smoothly.",
            "cn": "教师顺利地管理了主题之间的过渡。"
        }
    ],
    "classroom_atmosphere_en": "The classroom atmosphere was positive, encouraging, and interactive, fostering a comfortable learning environment for the student.",
    "classroom_atmosphere_cn": "课堂氛围积极、鼓励且互动性强,为学生营造了舒适的学习环境。",
    "objective_achievement": [
        {
            "en": "Most teaching objectives were met, with the student demonstrating understanding and ability to apply the concepts.",
            "cn": "大多数教学目标都已实现,学生展示了对概念的理解和应用能力。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Further practice is needed for consistent application, particularly with adverbial variety and pronoun choice.",
            "cn": "需要进一步练习以实现持续应用,特别是状语多样性和代词选择方面。"
        },
        {
            "en": "The homework assignment directly targets areas for improvement.",
            "cn": "家庭作业直接针对需要改进的领域。"
        }
    ],
    "teaching_strengths": {
        "identified_strengths": [
            {
                "en": "Clear explanations of complex grammar.",
                "cn": "对复杂语法的清晰解释。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Effective use of interactive exercises and student participation.",
                "cn": "有效利用互动练习和学生参与。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Good rapport building with the student.",
                "cn": "与学生建立了良好的融洽关系。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Ability to adapt lesson based on student's prior knowledge.",
                "cn": "根据学生的先有知识调整课程的能力。"
            }
        ],
        "effective_methods": [
            {
                "en": "Breaking down complex topics into manageable parts.",
                "cn": "将复杂主题分解为可管理的部分。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Using visual aids (pictures) for writing practice.",
                "cn": "使用视觉辅助(图片)进行写作练习。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Providing immediate feedback and correction.",
                "cn": "提供即时反馈和纠正。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Encouraging student-led identification of grammatical elements.",
                "cn": "鼓励学生主导识别语法元素。"
            }
        ],
        "positive_feedback": [
            {
                "en": "The teacher acknowledged the student's effort and progress ('very good', 'brilliant').",
                "cn": "教师肯定了学生的努力和进步(“非常好”,“太棒了”)。"
            },
            {
                "en": "The teacher made the lesson engaging with relevant anecdotes (e.g., cats and tigers).",
                "cn": "教师通过相关的趣闻(例如,猫和老虎)使课程引人入胜。"
            },
            {
                "en": "The homework assignment was clearly explained with emphasis on the learning goals.",
                "cn": "作业被清晰地解释,并强调了学习目标。"
            }
        ]
    },
    "specific_suggestions": [
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-volume-up",
            "category_en": "Pronunciation & Reading",
            "category_cn": "发音与阅读",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Continue practicing reading sentences with relative clauses and adverbials aloud to improve fluency and pronunciation.",
                    "cn": "继续大声朗读包含关系从句和状语的句子,以提高流利度和发音。"
                },
                {
                    "en": "Pay attention to the intonation when reading non-restrictive clauses (with commas).",
                    "cn": "注意朗读非限定性从句(带逗号)时的语调。"
                }
            ]
        },
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-comments",
            "category_en": "Speaking & Communication",
            "category_cn": "口语与交流",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "When speaking, try to consciously incorporate relative clauses to provide more detailed descriptions.",
                    "cn": "说话时,尝试有意识地加入关系从句,以提供更详细的描述。"
                },
                {
                    "en": "Practice describing events using different types of adverbials (how, where, when, why) to enrich spoken narratives.",
                    "cn": "练习使用不同类型的状语(如何、何地、何时、为何)来描述事件,以丰富口头叙述。"
                }
            ]
        },
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-pencil-alt",
            "category_en": "Writing",
            "category_cn": "写作",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Focus on varied adverbial usage in the homework story, ensuring a mix of time, place, manner, and frequency adverbials.",
                    "cn": "在家庭作业故事中专注于多样的状语用法,确保混合使用时间、地点、方式和频率状语。"
                },
                {
                    "en": "Review the rules for using commas with non-restrictive relative clauses to avoid errors.",
                    "cn": "复习带非限定性关系从句的逗号使用规则,以避免错误。"
                },
                {
                    "en": "When omitting relative pronouns in restrictive clauses, double-check that the meaning remains clear.",
                    "cn": "在省略限定性关系从句中的关系代词时,请仔细检查以确保意思清晰。"
                }
            ]
        },
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-book-open",
            "category_en": "Grammar",
            "category_cn": "语法",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Consciously practice choosing the correct relative pronoun (who\/which\/that\/whose) based on the noun it modifies and its function in the clause.",
                    "cn": "有意识地练习根据关系代词所修饰的名词及其在从句中的功能来选择正确的关系代词(who\/which\/that\/whose)。"
                },
                {
                    "en": "Review the distinction between essential (restrictive) and non-essential (non-restrictive) information in sentences.",
                    "cn": "复习句子中必要信息(限定性)和非必要信息(非限定性)的区别。"
                }
            ]
        }
    ],
    "next_focus": [
        {
            "en": "Continued practice with relative clauses and adverbials, potentially moving towards more complex sentence structures.",
            "cn": "继续练习关系从句和状语,可能转向更复杂的句子结构。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Introduction to or further practice with other types of complex sentences or clauses.",
            "cn": "介绍或进一步练习其他类型的复杂句子或从句。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Focus on integrating these structures into more extended writing pieces.",
            "cn": "专注于将这些结构融入更长的写作篇章。"
        }
    ],
    "homework_resources": [
        {
            "en": "Write a story starting with 'The clock struck...', aiming to use at least ten adverbials and four relative clauses. Highlight these structures once completed.",
            "cn": "写一篇以“钟声敲响……”开头的作文,目标是使用至少十个状语和四个关系从句。完成后高亮显示这些结构。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Online grammar resources for reviewing relative clauses and adverbials (e.g., BBC Learning English, Grammarly Blog).",
            "cn": "在线语法资源,用于复习关系从句和状语(例如,BBC Learning English, Grammarly Blog)。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Suggested reading materials that prominently feature complex sentences with relative clauses and adverbials.",
            "cn": "建议阅读材料,其中应突出包含关系从句和状语的复杂句子。"
        }
    ]
}
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