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1. Course Basic Information 1. 课程基本信息

Course Name: 0201 English Charlie 课程名称： 0201 英语 Charlie 课程

Topic: Reviewing an Advert Design and Introduction to Balanced Arguments 主题： 复习广告设计与介绍平衡论证

Date: Date not specified in transcript 日期： 日期未在文本中指明

Student: Charlie 学生： Charlie

Teaching Focus 教学重点

Reviewing the structure and required elements of an effective advertisement and introducing the concept and structure of a balanced argument (for and against).

复习有效广告的结构和所需要素，并介绍平衡论证（正反方）的概念和结构。

Teaching Objectives 教学目标

Review and apply criteria for a high-quality final advert design. 复习并应用高质量最终广告设计的标准。
Understand the concept and structure of a balanced argument (for and against). 理解平衡论证（正反方）的概念和结构。
Practice using precise language (e.g., definition, thesaurus use) for writing improvement. 练习使用精确的语言（如定义、同义词典使用）来改进写作。

2. Course Content Overview 2. 课程内容概览

Main Teaching Activities and Time Allocation 主要教学活动和时间分配

Personal Check-in & Holiday Talk: Teacher and student briefly discuss Charlie's recent trip to Thailand and his excellent exam results.

个人问候与假期交流： 师生简要讨论了Charlie最近的泰国之行以及他出色的考试成绩。

Advert Review: Zetty Scooter: Review of Charlie's draft advert design for the Zetty scooter, focusing on spelling, punctuation, and checking against an assessment grid (e.g., sensory appeal, slogan, rhetorical questions).

广告复习：Zetty 滑板车： 复习Charlie为Zetty滑板车设计的草稿广告，重点关注拼写、标点符号，并对照评估表进行检查（例如，感官吸引力、标语、反问句）。

Language Tools Introduction: Instruction on how to use a dictionary (finding words by initial letters) and introduction to a thesaurus for vocabulary expansion.

语言工具介绍： 指导如何使用词典（通过首字母查找单词）并介绍同义词典以扩展词汇量。

Introduction to Balanced Argument: Introduction to the structure of a balanced argument (for/against) using the topic: 'Should TV adverts aimed at children be banned?'.

平衡论证介绍： 介绍平衡论证的结构（正/反方），主题是：“是否应该禁止针对儿童的电视广告？”。

Homework Assignment: Student assigned to brainstorm at least three points for and three points against banning adverts for children.

作业布置： 布置作业，要求学生为“禁止针对儿童的广告”和“不禁止针对儿童的广告”分别列出至少三个理由。

Language Knowledge and Skills 语言知识与技能

Vocabulary:
succulent, navigation, thesaurus, definition, elated, joyful, ecstatic, conjunction, adverbials, jingles, attractive

词汇：
多汁的/美味的, 导航, 同义词典, 定义, 兴奋的, 快乐的, 狂喜的, 连词, 副词短语, 歌曲/广告曲, 吸引人的

Concepts:
Polished piece, Balanced Argument (For and Against), Rhetorical Question, Direct Speech/Speech Bubble, Formal Language (Third Person), Causal Conjunctions, Adverbials.

概念：
精修稿/打磨过的作品, 平衡论证（正反方）, 反问句, 直接引语/对话气泡, 正式语言（第三人称）, 因果连词, 副词（短语）

Skills Practiced:
Self-assessment of writing (spelling, punctuation), Oral explanation of abstract concepts (dictionary use, thesaurus), Argument structuring.

练习技能：
写作自我评估（拼写、标点），口头解释抽象概念（词典使用、同义词典），论证结构化。

Teaching Resources and Materials 教学资源与材料

Student's draft advert for Zetty scooter. 学生为Zetty滑板车准备的草稿广告。
Assessment Grid for Advertising Criteria. 广告标准评估表。
Video demonstration of food styling techniques (for the balanced argument section). 食物造型技巧演示视频（用于平衡论证部分）。

3. Student Performance Assessment (Charlie) 3. 学生表现评估 (Charlie)

Participation and Activeness 参与度和积极性

Charlie was actively engaged, particularly during the detailed review of his advert and the subsequent discussion on language tools. Charlie 积极参与，尤其在详细审查他的广告和随后关于语言工具的讨论中表现活跃。

Language Comprehension and Mastery 语言理解和掌握

Good comprehension of complex grammatical and literary terms (e.g., definition, thesaurus) when explained clearly. 对复杂语法和文学术语（例如，定义、同义词典）在得到清晰解释后理解良好。
Understood the core task for the homework: creating for/against points for a balanced argument. 理解了本周作业的核心任务：为平衡论证创建正反方论点。

Language Output Ability 语言输出能力

Oral: 口语：

Clear recounting of travel experiences (Thailand) with good use of past tense. 清晰地叙述了旅行经历（泰国），并很好地使用了过去时态。
Hesitation noted when defining complex terms like 'navigation' and 'thesaurus' without teacher prompts, though correct answers were eventually provided. 在没有老师提示的情况下，定义如'navigation'和'thesaurus'等复杂术语时略有犹豫，但最终给出了正确答案。

Written: 书面：

The draft advert showed excellent use of punctuation (triple exclamation mark) and strong, memorable slogans ('Your chores done, your time yours'). Spelling, when checked, was mostly perfect, though reliance on AI for complex words was noted.

草稿广告显示了出色的标点符号使用（三感叹号）和有力、令人难忘的标语（“Your chores done, your time yours”）。经检查，拼写大多完美，但注意到了对复杂词汇的AI依赖性。

Student's Strengths 学生的优势

Excellent command of spelling and punctuation in the draft advert. 在草稿广告中拼写和标点符号的运用非常出色。
Ability to create catchy slogans and utilize positive, appealing language. 能够创造吸引人的标语并运用积极、吸引人的语言。
Demonstrated high achievement in recent academic exams (Maths/English 100%). 展示了近期学业考试的高成就（数学/英语 100%）。

Areas for Improvement 需要改进的方面

Incorporating rhetorical questions into advertising copy as required by the rubric. 按照评分标准，在广告文案中加入反问句。
Independently verifying spellings using a dictionary rather than relying solely on AI/prior knowledge. 独立使用词典验证拼写，而不是完全依赖人工智能/先前的知识。
Ensuring all sentences end with correct punctuation (full stops/exclamation marks) in all written work. 确保所有书面作业中句子的结尾都有正确的标点符号（句号/感叹号）。

4. Teaching Reflection 4. 教学反思

Effectiveness of Teaching Methods 教学方法的有效性

The review of the advert was highly effective in pinpointing specific areas for improvement using a structured assessment grid. 通过结构化的评估网格，对广告的复习在明确改进的具体方面上非常有效。
The introduction to the balanced argument was clear, providing necessary structural components (for/against, third person, conclusion). 对平衡论证的介绍很清晰，提供了必要的结构要素（正反方、第三人称、结论）。

Teaching Pace and Time Management 教学节奏和时间管理

The pace was generally good, but the comprehensive review of the Zetty advert took up significant time, requiring the balanced argument introduction to be slightly rushed at the end. 整体节奏良好，但对Zetty广告的全面复习花费了大量时间，导致平衡论证的介绍在最后略显仓促。

Classroom Interaction and Atmosphere 课堂互动和氛围

Positive, encouraging, and focused, with the teacher frequently praising Charlie's efforts and achievements.

积极、鼓励和专注，老师经常表扬查理的努力和成就。

Achievement of Teaching Objectives 教学目标的达成

The first objective (advert review) was largely met through detailed feedback. 第一个目标（广告复习）通过详细反馈基本达成。
The second objective (balanced argument introduction) was introduced, but detailed practice will need to continue next lesson. 平衡论证部分已介绍，但详细练习需要在下一课继续。

5. Subsequent Teaching Suggestions 5. 后续教学建议

Teaching Strengths 教学优势

Identified Strengths: 识别的优势：

Detailed, criterion-based assessment of student work (the advert grid). 基于标准的、对学生作品（广告网格）的详细评估。
Effective scaffolding for abstract concepts like dictionary use and thesaurus function. 对抽象概念如词典使用和同义词典功能的有效脚手架支持。

Effective Methods: 有效方法：

Linking new concepts (balanced argument) directly to a real-world, relatable topic (advertising ethics). 将新概念（平衡论证）直接与现实世界中相关的主题（广告道德）联系起来。
Providing concrete examples and modeling for the new writing structure (balanced argument). 为新的写作结构（平衡论证）提供具体的例子和示范。

Positive Feedback: 正面反馈：

High praise for Charlie's exam results and the strong elements already present in his advert draft. 对查理的考试成绩以及他广告草稿中已有的强项给予了高度赞扬。

Next Teaching Focus 下一步教学重点

Developing and writing a complete balanced argument on the topic of advertising ethics, ensuring the use of third-person formal language. 围绕广告道德主题，发展和撰写一个完整的平衡论证，确保使用第三人称正式语言。

Specific Suggestions for Student's Needs 针对学生需求的具体建议

Writing & Editing: 写作与编辑：

For the next advert, ensure all required elements from the rubric, specifically rhetorical questions, are integrated. 对于下一个广告，确保整合了评分标准中要求的所有要素，特别是反问句。
When writing persuasive copy, practice replacing common words with synonyms found in a thesaurus to broaden vocabulary. 在撰写说服性文案时，练习用同义词典中找到的同义词替换常用词，以扩展词汇量。

Grammar & Mechanics: 语法与机械性：

Always double-check that every sentence ends with appropriate terminal punctuation (full stop, question mark, or exclamation mark). 务必仔细检查每个句子是否以适当的句末标点符号（句号、问号或感叹号）结束。

Speaking & Communication: 口语与交流：

Continue practicing defining new vocabulary items without immediate teacher assistance to solidify understanding. 继续练习在没有老师立即帮助的情况下定义新词汇，以巩固理解。

Recommended Supplementary Learning Resources or Homework 推荐的补充学习资源或家庭作业

Brainstorm at least three supporting arguments for banning TV adverts aimed at children and three arguments against banning them. 为“禁止针对儿童的电视广告”至少列出三个支持论据，并列出三个反对禁止的论据。
Review the list of causal conjunctions and adverbials provided in class to use in the balanced argument structure. 复习课堂上提供的因果连词和副词列表，以便在平衡论证结构中使用。