Oh, can you hear? Me, hi, okay, perfect, just okay, okay, perfect. All dun, I think you're doing gcse English, right? This is four, right? Okay, okay, this year, right? And I wanted to know specifically, what are you aiming for? Is it writing, reading? What are you struggling with the most? Writing? Okay, perfect. And is it the aq way or at Cambridge syyour sitting mming pool? So let me check very quickly. Okay, go somewhere. Well, do you want to know the poems or like the like text? I'm doing well. I think that was probably I think I had amazing. Wait, is it the same? I think it's the same. Let me show you the screen for a segment less you. So thank you. Okay, you can see my screen. Is it this specific? Not this one. I don't really know what this is. No, okay, not this one, right? No. Well, I can find it because I've got a school one that helps me. Perfect. I've got a school website, English. Are we doing English law or English language of both? I can do both. I think English law, if you prepare whichever one. Yeah, I prefer let. Literature. Course, God. So right now. Check. I was doing Alexi cse for English English language and then for literature. Let me try to find it. So we've got one nineteenth century novel, one modern drama and then heretree and then Shakespeare. So for Shakespeare we're doing like Beth poetry, then conflipoetry. I can I can send you these specific ones. Drama within leave taking. And in th nineteenth century novel would doing great expectations. Okay, alright, perfect. So maybe we can focus on igcenglish first. Yeah Yeah. Later on we can continue because this is writing and specific. So even in itcse at excel, there are two language, a and b. Do you know which one you'll be specifically? Not actually that should me check. A A, Hey, perfect. All right. Okay, let me open up the Yeah do you prefer looking at one specific PaaS paper to see where you stand like your level does? I help. Yeah, yes, please. I mean, no, actually, can we just do like I mean, I'll already know because I want to sort of go through like English liferus with Macbeth because okay, sure. Matbeis the one out, but I ally I'm not a bit unsure about. Okay, let me see. Do you have the textbook? Let me just. Textbook, this thing I do. You have completed the whole thing, right? The whole Yeah map, but perfect. I've I've forgotten a bit of it. So I should need some revision. I think no problem. Just look at one of the recent papers so we can see. Where you stand? Can you see my screen on? No, you can't. I can't see her notice it. It just stops sharing. Let mean probably do this one, but. Yeah, we are going to look at the specimen paper. So that way we will cover what the examiner wants us to know. So that way. Let me he once again can you see now? Let me see if I can save ved on the chat. So. Now you make that. Let's see if I can it here. I'll send it on the chat box just in case, hopefully you can see it. If you want to do the whole thing, I shall share the chat. Or specifically in the group. Maybe that, that way I think is will show you. You still don't see it, I just that no. I've sent it on the group itself. Wait, do you mean like the meeting group chat or like meeting group chat and in or like the app group chat? The app group chat? Okay, then app group chat if possible. I think hopefully because I don't know how to open app group chat because I'm on meeting right now so I don't think I can open it. Oh, okay, you cannot open it. Okay, no problem, right? Okay, let me then show you the reading and then let's see if you can answer the question. Okay? It's all good. Do you remember all that? I remember this bit. I thought he killed Bangko straight after he became king. No let. Me show you that other part as well just in case. But just try to think about the question. So focus on the question. Yeah. So you want distract. Wait, is it okay of you? Okay. If you go up a bit to the question questions here. Did you get an idea, question or good? I feel like it's sort of getting a lot more. I think theystart getting a distance because of Macbeth's position. He's like my lord, but before they were best friends, and now he's calling him my lord. So I think there's like a slight like distance between them. That's correct. Anything about method being kind of seemingly friendly? Any part which shows that any part that well, he said, well, he calls my lord. He says, my as far my lord. When when they're like best friends, like like I'm not sure how they like medieval and like like his like so like like like the period like I meant address each other like even though you guys are best friend, but I think that's like pretty like personally, Yeah I'd say that's like pretty like distancing because this shows that they're just not friends anymore. It's kind of sad because I mean, they used to be best friends. Right now they're calling each other lords and it's still like the distance between them. That's kind of them. Yeah that is how about maod self confident attitude? Macbeth's confident attitude, I'd say. That's confident attitude. Anything in specific that kind of gives Methods D's attitude like self confidence. I say he's pretty confident because now he's king. So what he always wanted then didn' T Bank called know about the witches and he could have like, and they could have, and he might suspect Macbeth. I think that could happen because after, like he he does know that it could have been the witches that led to Macbeth, like killing the king because because how you said, because because the witchers were the one who told him. And then he was also sted there when the witchers said banof yshabe king here and after said then he I think Banco might know something that the king unken's death is related to him in some way. Yeah, that is parade. Yeah and if you see like whenever math kind of refers to we like tonight we older the so on you can see that he's representing we so confidently, right? Showing that they have Yeah Yeah showing that he has good ideas or showing his good desires. Yeah that and the relationship because he's very ambitious and he's just like willing to do anything to get it sort of get power. He's like very ambitious, correct? Yes, nice, but alright, right. Was actually I think you have the points with that. But Yeah, anything else you would like to add all. Anything else I would like to add? No, I think, I mean, wait, okay, we screw up a bit. Let John, sir, they call to the sir. He called him Macbeth, calls him sir. He's a chief guest, sir. I think it's quite formal. And it shows like the slight distancing that Banco and Macbeth have, like sort gotten, that is, how about math book using, if you see it, the short direct questions he asked, these type of questions, he rered very short, which kind of represent as what. To like he is trying to porin a family just doesn't trust him. Yeah, that's thank you to afternoon I my good lord. Yes, could be I'd say that is it actually can have two sides too because if it's a short question that kind of represents that he's more like showing a friendly movement, right? I can also do it. Anything else or nothing more for this one? Here's how question questions. Hrequire brsets. I'd say if it was if it was, I think just a way the term is speak in general. And it also says tonight, we hold a solemn and our. Request preeither of that. It's just how they normally speak. But I don't think it is because because I've seen them talk to each other before and it was like a lot more different than how they was now. Or it's just that they've of like they've sort of like sort like dense distance themselves after he became king, because Banco knows, because the other prophecy was that Banko's child will become king. And then because of that, macmacbeth is like, you know he's he's very paranoid because he killed someone else and he skto betryal himself as well. So then to like stop so stop himself from being betrade yed, I think he killed Banko's family and Banquo. So I think he this is really trust like after Banco mentioned the weird ladies, I think he he he he reminds, reminds he's reminded of the things that I happen if. Yeah if if he's not careful, that is yes, that is correct. Okay, that's nice. I think if you in that specific answer would be really good as as an ending also it has a strong aligning with the question. So well done. Yep. Okay. Yeah okay. Hmm. Option. Do you have any? Presents the relationship between Bangkok and Macbeth. Time to say fuse my lord. I will not I think this constant like repetition of my lord, it does show that the relationship between them has changed. He's just always like, my lord, my lord, it's either the I'm not sure it's Yeah like again, I think it's either the etiquette of of. The etiquette of of like medimedieval people or it's just them like they're distancing themselves. Yeah it's kind of sad because so like great great expectations were like best friends distance themselves and then Yeah Yeah Yeah you can bring in that point specifically to do it. Once a very close relationship has been a very distant relationship, you can kind of address that. Yep. Yeah, okay. Anything else you want to look at because there are many other sections also not this Yeah. So or I'll show you another. Question. That's also fine. Whichever one you want to do. Is it okay? We send it in like the meeting group chat so that I can like scroll like I think I've sent it to on the meeting chat as well. Are you able to open it up? Should be able to. Oh, no, I don't think I can. It's fine. Fine. Okay, it's okay. Maybe I'll show you the holding thing. Alright, maybe the so this part is clear or do you want to refer to this move? I'd say this part. Clear. Yeah this one is clear. Okay. Okay. I mean, if you mean this is actually a good I would say good question to do for homework if you can, but probably because it's a weekday, probably a busy week schowork. This is the next one. But do you only want to focus on macmuright? Oh Justin, can you hear me? Yeah, Yeah. Do you want to leave focus on macnet or do you want to also focus on other Yeah Yeah, Yeah Yeah. Okay, then I've already sent it so you'll see because I don't know, I just can't receive it in the meeting chat. Hmm, that's weird. Be fine. That's okay. Let me show you the specific one. Can you see a bit that. They also have a sample answer, which I also want to show you as the second one. Yeah, let me show you my other screen. I you able to see my other screen just in? Loading. Think. Yeah, I can see, can't see. Oh, they can't me scroll down a bit. She is in control and then being is okay, you scup a bit more, please. Oh, boy. Also, I've kept like a model answer just in case you want to look at what this specific question is looking for. Yeah, we kind of look at the text again because don't really okay. Thank you. Give me the daggers sleyour dinner as. I think Shakespeare uses quite a lot of exclamation Marks to show that mrses Lady Macbeth was shouting and like very just like emotionally, well, emotionally like. Oh, very. If you're sort of loud and Macbeth is like not being that loud, I think you can sort of tell that she's in control because. Well, because I'd say I mean, I just say that. This is because what code would you use to prove your point? Three, Press out on it. I think the repetition of repeated use of exclamation Marks like, such as like, and for my purpose, give me the daggers. My hands are were hard so wide making the Green one red or house as me what hands are there? Oh she's hashakespeare I killed ilthe eyes of the groom's withal the airs of painted devil he if do be I mean I really understand what's going on here that's why I thought maybe away what they're trying to say Yeah I think if you see specific Yeah I think that point is kind of tricky when you took if you say give me the taggers in what's it Yeah about the purpose section you can see that he is weak minded emphasizing that lady macbehas power over him because Yeah. She talks down on him as well. Natural. Yeah, that's something you could address. This is pretty much a challenge. That's why I thought maybe even if I show you a model answer which scored 19 mark Yeah, it would be if I saw the model answer Yeah, I the model attached it here. Hopefully it's Yeah, this was actually 19. Hopefully this will help. Sorry about the dogs backing constantly. No, can't I can't hear. I'm sorry, that was my grandpa screaming in. Red is already taking upgrades to think on. Oh right. So this is off the he's killed King Duncan right? Yes. Okay let me show you. All Yeah Yeah good all right. Yep so the conclusion part wasn't given this is b and this was actually the examined the k of 19 because Yeah there was a good flow in the answer so Yeah hopefully you were able to get and get them more idea of how the flow of a 20 marker should look like. Yeah how long how much time do we get? 1:20y marker. Usually they say 20 to 25, but some depending on how with like basically five to ten minutes to plan because usually students kind of change. They are planning time and they lack the time to write. So you need to be a little cautious. About time. So I would say maths would be 3030 minutes. Shall? We try b hopefully Yeah, like I said this about the character, I think won't be quite a challenge, but. If you can, you can give the points for a as well before we move on to b to you. Yeah the conflict between characters and conflict sharing. All right, but I don't have right, I'll try remember the context and you look at the text piece like the extract. Wait, is it not fine? So I think conflict is shown like between. Hmm, let's say that. I think the constant use of exclamation mark can also show that the voice tones were raised, like voices were raised and you can share like like the intensity was raised. So I think that you can I mean, I think you can tell from that. What else can be addrerisk? I'd say. Well, all great napchains. So he uses like hyperbole well, all great Neptunes, ocean wahis blood. So I think the context while people drained that time is very religious. And if he's using something like great Neptune, which is the God of sea, I think I think he's taken very seriously and he does he don't think you know the ocean could wash the blood off his hands. I think it shows how guilty he is from killing King Duncan because hyperbole and the and the fact that people at the Titan were like very religious. Yeah so I think you can show Yeah that can be shown. Yeah, that's. The. Especially I'm. Act two, scene two also helps to show map, but loyalty. Loyalty hands are called body shaped, where heart so White, I hear a market entry, but I read to a Chamberlist. Be not lost of poin the thoughts I think Lady Macbeth thinks he's like overthinking and like a bit too scared like he he shouldn't be so scared of everything. Yeah and that is right. Alright. Even here if you see matries to say about I'm afraid to think what I have done. So which again shows Yeah he's guilt and Yeah the conflict between the teams and loyalty becoming comly also can be addressed here. Oh. What else? Just. When I'm knocking with me, when every nocalls me hands are there, I my eyes. All right, so he's even more scared because he's a instead of washing the blood off his hands, his the blood were actually. The blood will actually affect, will actually turn the entire ocean red. So I think that's like the hyperbole, the exaggeration actually just shows how scared how scared how scared Macbeth is. And Lady Macbeth is like telling him to calm down, but he can't calm down. So I think it just shows how scared they are. So Yeah Yeah that's exactly. Any other? This can also be a girls. Your thoughts, how easy and your concy has left you attended where go down a bit. Sorry. So poorly in your thoughts being not also of I think you say you've got some poor judgment Yeah is okay actually see the moderate answer? Yes, you can't through it. But I think usual case most of the students couldn't school for this specific one. I don't know why, but the highest I believe was for this section is seven th 18. But even though the student got an 18, that's just not the right format. So this is 17 and having a good flow. Right? So you have slow with conflict is a central theme and then this. See. That is great. And then the complete part, I mean, this answer is pretty long, a little longer than previous one, but still got least 17. So remember, the keywords are the must and the format, the quotation and emphasizing them, analyzing them, that's the main part, not about the lens. Yeah. Were able to finish reading. Yeah, Yeah, I've seen it. All right, okay, hopefully Justin, you got a broader perspective of how and how examiners prefer students to answer and how you can sceasily. You don't need to know so much in detail. You can just give the context that they have given and expand, right? So Yeah, Yeah do you have any questions? Okay, I think we have a lesson tomorrow. Tomorrow also. Do you prefer this? Looking at macyes please. Okay, I will focus on that. Okay then all right, this is at the end of the lesson. Hopefully this productive for you just in and Yeah, I will see you tomorrow then have a nice day. See you. Okay, thank you.