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Hey, adden, how are you? All good. Good. Did you have a nice weekend? Yeah, good. Or have we done our homework? I don't think it's been submitted. Oh, it didn't attach the worksheet. That's like the third the third homework test last week where clasin did not upload the worksheet that I've attached. That's very annoying. So don't worry about that either. That's class infault mariissilly. Waiting speech. Okay, we're moving on today on to some apostrophes work. So adden, can we remember what an apostrophe is? And we use that word apostrophe. A comma. It's a little bit like a comma, isn't it? But what makes it different from a comma? This is like someone are talking. That would be a speech mark, this one a little bit different, an apostrophe. So there's two different ways of using them. One is for contraction, one is for possession. And we'll see if we can look at both of those today, see if we've got time. First, we're going to start with contractions. Do you think you could read what it says on this slide for me? Adden, all of the writing on here correcare words that are joined together that not didn't, what's not wouldn't. Yeah, so contractions are when we connect words together. So. Oh, bless me. So we have like, did not if I want to make that one word, I turn it into didn't. But what's happened to the letters? Aiden? Have I still got all the letters? No, what's happened to one of my letters? Didn't come. So we've gone from did not into didn't one of the letters has disappeared when it turns into didn't what's happened to that letter? Oh, it's missing. The o is missing, isn't it? Yeah. And what's it been turned into instead? It's been turned into an apostrophe. So this. This bit here, Aiden, that is the apostrophe. Stroyeah so we've changed that kind of that o into that to show that the word is now shorter. Yeah and we need to put that apostrophe to show that we've taken those letters out. Really, really important. So same here with this one. The o has also been changed into an apostrophe, hasn't it? But it doesn't always need to be an o, as you'll see can be other letters as well. So this one is would not and it's turned into wouldn't. Okay. Okay, so here we've got some more examples. Can you read both these examples and this writing for me? He's he is she's she is haven't have not she ouldn't she not wos was not there. They are Dave. They have. Where's the muffin man? He's starting to any annoy me. I haven't seen him for his friends in weeks. They've gone to Disneyland. It's the best. Good, good, good good job. So an apostrophe is used to shorten the word in wooden. The apostrophe replaces the o in there. The apostrophe places the at. So you see how in this one, the a in this time, the a has turned into the apostrophe for these two. So it doesn't always have to be an o Yeah. And this one that I has turned into the apostrophe. And sometimes more than one letter will turn into an apostrophe as well, rather than just one. Okay. Yeah, Yeah, cool. So can you write for me next to the word, the letter that has been removed? So for example, next to this one, I would write I, because an I has been removed. The teacher Yeah I think Hey Dave, there's they remove two words they have two letters. They have you're right. Which two letters? Yeah, so like I said, it can be two letters. They have Yeah very good. Okay. Here we have some question. A little quick poll. So which of those sentences is written correctly? Good. How do you know it's that one, Aiden, what's that with the other ones? Because I didn't. The o is changing to the strophe. Yeah and the supposed to add an. Good. Exactly. They haven't the other ones that just not in the right places, are they? Only the second one is in the right place yet. Good. What about this one? Good, well done the uk agent. Did you mean he raise your handle? Was it an accident? No, I want to go drink water. Yes, but that's fine. Yes, of course. Okay, yes yes. Okay. What about this one? Good again, they are. So I to be placing the a that's missing. Good. Next one. Good again that they are well done. Oops. I good. So here it says Schrek has a problem, which he needs you to help him with. He has written a short letter to donkey and puin booze, which will be on the next slide, and wants you to check it. For any mistakes, look out for incorrect use of contractions in the letter. Maybe there are more mistakes. Okay. So can you read the letter for me and what? Just read it for me. First aid. And then you'll have a think about any mistakes. You're donkey and pusing boots. You're in big trouble. You too. What have you done with all the money we made for cirthree receiving two racks? How do you expect me feed my great kids? They're eating everything. It's too much working for firm. And I want my money donkey if I find you mis all in left veges or even worse put a season ticket to see if pool or Chinese there will be trouble. Plus it thought more of you I didn't think it was still you spending spending our money on mtv parand acting the was hwhat are you thinking going I I'm a celebrity who gets me out here they're all crazy when at that show I went all the money returns is to the swarm or I will be eating donkey and. Cool. Why can't we see the full thing? Hang on, Aiden, let me just get the full picture up. There we go, or I will be eating donkey and. Where did they stop here? And cats pyou for Sunday lunch. Correct. Good. So what I want you to do for me, Aiden, is what you need to do is first you need to look out for the incorrect use of contractions in the letter. So can you see any apostrophes that have been used incorrectly? Just highlight them for me first. Okay. Teacher, Yeah, you can. Can I go to your bathroom? Yes, of course you can. Real quick, guys. Three minutes. That's okay. Back, you're about that guy. I'm going to quickly go to the bathroom with learn agent whilst you're doing that. Going Aden, there's definitely some more than that. Then how come you deleted some? Those ones are correct. Going, Aiden, there's still some more doing a good job. It's no seeds and more. You're okay, adent. I just want to drink the water again, okay? You can drink some water again. The. Okay, okay, I can still see a few more. Why can see? Oh, yes, good. Well done. I was just about to say that one. And you've noticed some of the other mistakes. Haven't you like four here? This I is okay. The toe is okay as well. But there are some things here as well, like maybe you can Oh, make it a bit darker like you've done. Okay. So what I'm going to do now. This color is fine as well. Okay. So what I want you to do for me, adent, is write out the corrections. So what should they say instead? How should they be written? Oh, you're going to write it like that. Okay? I'll get rid of my numbers then. So if you just Press enter ada den, then your bit will go underneath. Like this, if you Press the return button, it goes under like that. Yeah, just like that. Okay. Not quite for that. And that round number three, have another look at it for me. And number twelve. So number three and number twelve form me. Have another look at. 你能解我就你。Yeah, that's better now. That's good and well done. Very good, Aiden. Bye. Okay, next thing, have a go. I need to fill in the gaps, create the contractions here. Look. Ask one, I eat into. Are you sure how to do it? That we've got did not is didn't I think you've forssed that out, haven't you? Yeah could not, have, not, haven't, cannot, can't, hel I'd yed should have, shouldn't or check out that one for me. Number nine. Don't know what's going on there. Hello, stop. So they so it should be Aiden they apostrophe re Yeah there. The first time I do let get no, the first time it looked like this. Look, I can show you. Hey, hang on. Can you see should be like this they Yeah you forgot you forgot your why and you've your re should be the other way around like an R it's re not okay right well done Aiden. I'll give you a little writing task to do. I think using contractions, you can't go yet. No, because I'm setting your homework. 老师在给我布置这个作提前。Okay, Aiden, right. Well done n you've done worked very hard today. Lots of good writing and correcting. I hope you enjoy the rest of your day and I'll see you next week. Good work. Bye bye. Bye, bye bye.
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{
    "header_icon": "fas fa-crown",
    "course_title_en": "Language Course Summary",
    "course_title_cn": "语言课程总结",
    "course_subtitle_en": "1v1 English Lesson - Apostrophe Usage (Contractions)",
    "course_subtitle_cn": "1v1 英语课程 - 撇号用法(缩写)",
    "course_name_en": "Writing Lesson",
    "course_name_cn": "写作课程",
    "course_topic_en": "Apostrophes: Contractions and Possession Introduction",
    "course_topic_cn": "撇号:缩写和所有格的介绍",
    "course_date_en": "January 13th",
    "course_date_cn": "1月13日",
    "student_name": "Aiden",
    "teaching_focus_en": "Understanding and correctly applying apostrophes for contractions (replacing missing letters).",
    "teaching_focus_cn": "理解并正确应用撇号来表示缩写(替代缺失的字母)。",
    "teaching_objectives": [
        {
            "en": "Define the two main uses of apostrophes (contraction and possession).",
            "cn": "定义撇号的两种主要用法(缩写和所有格)。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Identify and correct errors in the use of apostrophes in contractions.",
            "cn": "识别并纠正缩写中撇号使用的错误。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Practice forming contractions by replacing omitted letters.",
            "cn": "练习通过替换省略的字母来构成缩写。"
        }
    ],
    "timeline_activities": [
        {
            "time": "Start",
            "title_en": "Homework Check and Introduction to Apostrophes",
            "title_cn": "作业检查与撇号介绍",
            "description_en": "Teacher addressed the missed homework submission. Introduced the concept of apostrophes, differentiating them from commas and quotation marks, and outlined the two uses: contraction and possession.",
            "description_cn": "老师提及了未提交的作业。介绍了撇号的概念,将其与逗号和引号区分开,并概述了两种用法:缩写和所有格。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Mid 1",
            "title_en": "Focus on Contractions: Definition and Examples",
            "title_cn": "聚焦缩写:定义与示例",
            "description_en": "Explained contractions as shortened words (e.g., did not -> didn't). Focused on identifying the missing letter (like 'o' or 'a') replaced by the apostrophe.",
            "description_cn": "解释了缩写是缩短的单词(例如 did not -> didn't)。重点是识别被撇号替代的缺失字母(如'o'或'a')。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Mid 2",
            "title_en": "Practice Identifying Letter Omission",
            "title_cn": "练习识别字母省略",
            "description_en": "Student practiced writing down the letter removed for various contractions (e.g., I've, They've).",
            "description_cn": "学生练习写出各种缩写中被移除的字母(例如 I've, They've)。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Mid 3",
            "title_en": "Error Correction Quiz (Multiple Choice)",
            "title_cn": "错误修正测验(多项选择)",
            "description_en": "Quick quiz identifying correctly written contractions in sentences.",
            "description_cn": "快速测验,识别句子中正确书写的缩写形式。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Main Activity",
            "title_en": "Schrek's Letter Error Correction (Extended Practice)",
            "title_cn": "史莱克信件错误修正(扩展练习)",
            "description_en": "Student analyzed a short letter filled with contraction errors (and possibly other mistakes) and highlighted\/corrected them. Included brief pauses for bathroom\/water.",
            "description_cn": "学生分析了一封充满缩写错误(可能还有其他错误)的短篇信件,并进行了高亮和修正。中间有短暂的洗手间\/饮水休息。"
        },
        {
            "time": "End",
            "title_en": "Creating Contractions and Homework Assignment",
            "title_cn": "创建缩写与布置作业",
            "description_en": "Student completed a gap-fill exercise to create contractions (e.g., could not -> couldn't). Teacher assigned a writing task using contractions as homework.",
            "description_cn": "学生完成了填空练习来创建缩写(例如 could not -> couldn't)。老师布置了使用缩写的写作作业。"
        }
    ],
    "vocabulary_en": "contraction, possession, apostrophe, comma, speech mark, omitted, correct, incorrect, replaced, haven't, wouldn't, they're, it's",
    "vocabulary_cn": "缩写,所有格,撇号,逗号,引号,省略的,正确的,不正确的,替代,haven't, wouldn't, they're, it's",
    "concepts_en": "Apostrophe as a marker for omitted letters in contractions; Apostrophe replacing specific letters (o, a, i).",
    "concepts_cn": "撇号作为缩写中省略字母的标记;撇号替代特定字母(o, a, i)。",
    "skills_practiced_en": "Reading comprehension (reading slide text and letter), Grammar application (identifying and correcting errors), Writing (creating contractions and homework task).",
    "skills_practiced_cn": "阅读理解(阅读幻灯片文本和信件),语法应用(识别和纠正错误),写作(创建缩写和完成作业)。",
    "teaching_resources": [
        {
            "en": "Slides explaining contractions and examples.",
            "cn": "解释缩写和示例的幻灯片。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Worksheet\/Text document containing Schrek's letter for error correction.",
            "cn": "包含史莱克信件的练习题\/文档用于错误修正。"
        }
    ],
    "participation_assessment": [
        {
            "en": "Aiden was actively engaged, responding verbally to teacher prompts throughout the lesson.",
            "cn": "Aiden 积极参与,在整个课程中对老师的提示做出了口头回应。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Required two reminders\/encouragements during the Schrek letter correction phase to identify all errors.",
            "cn": "在史莱克信件纠错阶段,需要老师两次提醒\/鼓励才能找出所有错误。"
        }
    ],
    "comprehension_assessment": [
        {
            "en": "Good initial grasp of what a contraction is (words joined together).",
            "cn": "对缩写的初步理解良好(单词连接在一起)。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Understood that the apostrophe replaces missing letters, but needed guidance on specific instances (like 'they're' correction).",
            "cn": "理解撇号替代缺失字母,但在特定实例中(如'they're'的修正)需要指导。"
        }
    ],
    "oral_assessment": [
        {
            "en": "Read requested text aloud reasonably clearly.",
            "cn": "能够相当清晰地朗读要求的文本。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Successfully explained *why* certain contractions were correct during the quiz section.",
            "cn": "在测验环节成功解释了为什么某些缩写是正确的。"
        }
    ],
    "written_assessment_en": "Completed gap-filling exercise for contractions. Showed difficulty with 'they're' initially, confusing it with 'their' or 'there' before correction.",
    "written_assessment_cn": "完成了缩写的填空练习。最初在'they're'上遇到困难,在更正前曾将其与'their'或'there'混淆。",
    "student_strengths": [
        {
            "en": "Quickly absorbed the core concept of contractions replacing letters.",
            "cn": "快速吸收了缩写替代字母的核心概念。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Showed diligence in correcting the errors in Schrek's letter, especially after initial prompting.",
            "cn": "在史莱克信件的错误修正中表现出勤奋,尤其是在得到初步提示后。"
        }
    ],
    "improvement_areas": [
        {
            "en": "Needs more practice distinguishing the correct replacement letter for less common contractions.",
            "cn": "需要更多练习来区分不常见缩写中正确的替代字母。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Attention to detail during error correction tasks sometimes wavers (required prompting to find all errors).",
            "cn": "在错误修正任务中,注意力有时会动摇(需要提示才能找到所有错误)。"
        }
    ],
    "teaching_effectiveness": [
        {
            "en": "The step-by-step breakdown from definition to complex error identification was effective.",
            "cn": "从定义到复杂错误识别的循序渐进的分解非常有效。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Using a large, error-filled text (Schrek's letter) provided excellent context for application.",
            "cn": "使用大篇幅、充满错误的文本(史莱克的信)为应用提供了极好的背景。"
        }
    ],
    "pace_management": [
        {
            "en": "Pace was generally good, slightly slowed down by necessary breaks (water\/bathroom) but the teacher smoothly integrated these pauses.",
            "cn": "节奏总体良好,因必要的休息(饮水\/洗手间)略有放缓,但老师平稳地整合了这些停顿。"
        },
        {
            "en": "The teacher successfully redirected focus back to the concept after interruptions.",
            "cn": "老师在中断后成功地将注意力重新引导回概念上。"
        }
    ],
    "classroom_atmosphere_en": "Supportive, patient, and encouraging, especially when dealing with the student's repeated requests for water.",
    "classroom_atmosphere_cn": "支持性、耐心且鼓励,尤其是在处理学生反复要求饮水时。",
    "objective_achievement": [
        {
            "en": "The focus on contractions was largely achieved; possession will need further dedicated time next session.",
            "cn": "对缩写的关注基本实现;所有格需要在下节课投入专门时间。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Student demonstrated competence in forming and identifying common contractions by the end of the structured practice.",
            "cn": "到结构化练习结束时,学生在形成和识别常见缩写方面表现出能力。"
        }
    ],
    "teaching_strengths": {
        "identified_strengths": [
            {
                "en": "Effective use of scaffolding, starting with simple examples and moving to complex text analysis.",
                "cn": "有效利用脚手架,从简单示例开始,过渡到复杂的文本分析。"
            }
        ],
        "effective_methods": [
            {
                "en": "The exercise requiring the student to write down the *omitted letter* solidified the function of the apostrophe.",
                "cn": "要求学生写下*被省略的字母*的练习巩固了撇号的功能。"
            }
        ],
        "positive_feedback": [
            {
                "en": "Positive reinforcement was used consistently ('Good, good, good', 'Well done').",
                "cn": "正面鼓励被持续使用('Good, good, good', 'Well done')。"
            }
        ]
    },
    "specific_suggestions": [
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-volume-up",
            "category_en": "Pronunciation & Reading",
            "category_cn": "发音与阅读",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Continue practicing reading contractions aloud to internalize the reduced sound structure.",
                    "cn": "继续练习大声朗读缩写,以内化其缩减的发音结构。"
                }
            ]
        },
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-comments",
            "category_en": "Speaking & Communication",
            "category_cn": "口语与交流",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "When using contractions like 'they're', pay close attention to the final sound to avoid confusing it with 'their' or 'there'.",
                    "cn": "在使用'they're'等缩写时,要特别注意最终发音,以避免与'their'或'there'混淆。"
                }
            ]
        },
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-pencil-alt",
            "category_en": "Writing Mechanics",
            "category_cn": "书写规范",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Practice identifying errors in long texts quickly; review the common letters omitted in contractions (o, a, i, will\/would vs shall\/should).",
                    "cn": "练习快速识别长文本中的错误;复习缩写中常见的省略字母(o, a, i, will\/would vs shall\/should)。"
                }
            ]
        }
    ],
    "next_focus": [
        {
            "en": "Introduction to the second use of the apostrophe: Possession (e.g., 'Aiden's book').",
            "cn": "介绍撇号的第二种用法:所有格(例如'Aiden's book')。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Review and solidify contractions, ensuring mastery over less common forms.",
            "cn": "复习和巩固缩写,确保掌握不常见的形式。"
        }
    ],
    "homework_resources": [
        {
            "en": "Complete the assigned writing task using at least five different contractions correctly.",
            "cn": "完成布置的写作任务,确保正确使用至少五种不同的缩写。"
        }
    ]
}
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