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Hey, how? Are you thank good? Good. Did you have a good Christmas break? Good. Did you do anything fun over Christmas, over the holiday? Yeah, I got you snowboarding. Oh yes, you went snowboarding, didn't you? Did you? You didn't fall over at any point. Didn't hurt yourself. Was it all okay? It's always helpful as ourselves. You said that you always hurt yourself. Like for some who who don't hurt themselves, well, that's okay then. Right? And what first. It ain't now, Mister Brown decided take his family for a Oh, I think we might have changed this around a bit. Hang on. Once Sunday in July misses. Misses Brown decided to take her family for a picnic in the woods. In the woods at bemish or stop. So let she made a big pile of sandwiches and put them in a plastic box. We'll stop. Call in, put you comment there, put some kinds of Coca Cola. Good capital letters don't need a comment, full stop. There, Colin, put some cans of Coca Cola for the children to drink. Mister Brown made a flask of coffee for himself and his wife, full stop. Tom filled a tin with biscuits and tiny cakes. Sarah put oranges, plums, apples. Apples and bananas into a bag when the food was ready. They packed it in the boot of the car and set off a Beamish capletter. Okay, still quite a few corrections on that. Ada der, not too many corrections on the punctuation. Many corrections on your wording. You've changed the wording for some reason when you were copying it out. They didn't need to do that. All of the wording should be the same. It's just the punctuation that needs to change. Yeah. Okay. Okay. Today. All we still have a little bit to finish on this fluctuation first before we move on. So if you remember, we were looking at how to the different ways of how to use commas in the last lesson. Let's just check where we are. Which ones did we get to parenthesis? Okay, so we did these ones. So next way to use a comma. Comma number five is for direct speech, which we're actually going to look at in more detail later. So I think I'm gonna to skip this one for now because we're gonna to do that together. So we will start with this one separating main and subordinate clauses. Can you remember what is the difference between a main and a subordinate clause agent? Because we did then a few weeks ago, didn't we? Can you remember? Can you remember the difference between these? One, it can make sense with its own. One can't make sense with its own. Good, very good. Well done. So here's some examples. Could you read them for me? These down here for me, agent. Well, we're waiting. You can use a magic. Also, I love football. Swimming is my favorite sport. So notice how these, the blue part is a subordinate clause, the black part is the main clause, and we're using a comma to separate it because the subordinate clause is coming first. So can you have a go for me? Can you add in the commas to separate the main subordinate clauses here for me? What are those lines for? Like the Green one, the Green line is like the main. Okay, so you're just showing me which one. Okay, that's fine. So what you should be doing adden, is you should just be you should just be putting a comma between the main and the subordinate clause for me, just a comma to show where they are separate. Not quite. Try again for this one. And this one, this one's okay. This one's good. Try those top two again for me. There we go. That's ventor. Well done. So notice how we've got a helthat's not ready to face the day. You can hear the pause until she's had no coffee. Although it's unhealthy, chocolate makes people unhapper. You want to hear that pause, and that's where your comma will go. Good. Okay. Then we have the next one, which is separating elements in a sentence that express contrast. So that essentially means when you've got like a different opinion, maybe could you read the examples for me? Not the building as enormous as ugly. She enjoys the music in the show. Not the act. Not the acting. Yeah. So can you see how it's like it's big but ugly? She enjoyed the music. Not the acting was showing like usually it's two different descriptions. So here we've got two different sentences. Which one is got the correct punctuation? Look at the examples. Which one is like the examples? Yeah. So if you like learning English in school, not French, we want this fit the bit that's opposite to be on the end after the comma. Have a go at writing your own for me, Aiden. Have a look at your comma. Is it in the right place? That's better. He he likes to play Roblox, not Minecraft. Yeah, good. Okay. And last one then is when we're separating dates and years or towns, things like that. Could you read the examples for me? I grew up in kas, north London. My grandwas born on March 20 fifth 1942. Good. So can you see how we've got a comma? This is the town and this is the city. Or, you know, maybe if you were to say like Beijing, China, we are using, you know, the city separated from the country. We use a comma to show that here we've got the year separated from the day in the month like that with the comma. So this says Jemima writes the movie was shown on Friday 20 fourth November, 5:00p.m.. And Oscar writes that tube who has written it correctly. Good. Why? Because it was a comma after the date. Good, remember to use the comma, hasn't it? You have a go for me. Okay, where's that 2025? Oh, you writing another one? That's okay. It's confused then. You can go drink butter, coffee can't. Okay. So in England, we actually do these the other way around. It would be 30 first because if you were to write first, it's nst. So first December. 2025 like that and then it would have to be like at 11:00p.m.or something, maybe because we need the comma to separate that or maybe we could do comma again at 11:00p.m.. All right, next we move on to having a look at direct speech. So when we talk about speech, Aiden, what is that? What is speech in writing? Like. Comma and like circle, and not those ones. No speech, just this. So don't get distracted by this. What is speech? I forgot. Okay, that's fine. It's like when someone is speaking, Aiden, you know, like when we use said, you know, hello, said the boy, that is speak. We're showing when someone is speaking. So sometimes we can use what's called reported speech, and we don't have we don't have to use punctuation to show that someone said something. Could you read what it says on the board here? Adall of this? Report summaries, what has been said, it does not usually curve. The words sposo doesn't need any special, for example, the good said, the day wants to eat the Green grass on the other side of the bridge, the troshouted to the goats to stay on their own side of the stream. But then we have something called direct speech, and that is when we have to use punctuation, okay? So the punctuation helps us to sort of follow along with the conversation. So can you read what it says here? Embedcommerce, the most important role in graduation is that all words book must be enclosed by inverted commas. Embrdges English a single invercomma as best get off my bridge, however, is okay to use a double invercomma as well. Get off my bridge. Whichever you choose, use it constantly across the. Everything. So when we're punctuating our speech, we make sure that all of our punctuation goes inside the speech Marks. Aiden, okay, so like you know here, we've got an exclamation mark to show that he's shouting that goes inside the speech Marks. The question mark to show us the question goes inside the speech mark. What can you notice here? Aden? What's been used and know here? Why have the user plumber there is at the end? Why not just use the full stop? Next this will stop a long time. It's A A I just like sports stop a little bit. Yeah. And also, if we were to put a full stop there, we would end up having two full stops in one sentence, which we can't have. So if at the end of your speech you've got writing after it and you don't want to put an exclamation mark or a question mark, then you must put a comma. And we don't want to use two speech Marks and two punctuation at the end. We would just use a question mark and a speech mark, not a question mark, a comma and a speech mark. That's too many bits of punctuation. And can you read this part for me as well? Does the speech come after a verb? Common must be used after the verb to show that the speech is about the to begin note the speech must always begin with a chapter letter. For example, the smallest belly ghost grai'll go first, the chsaid it who goes there? The biggest a very good, Oh no. So can you see how they're putting a comma, a speech mark, and then a capital letter, a comma, speech mark, capital letter, a comma, speech mark, capital letter. If you're saying like said, then that's coming. Then you need to do that to kind of introduce all the speech. I might have a video which shows this. Then if I still got it, yes, let's watch this video to help us. Astronaut Vicky was on her first space mission. She had just passed her space driving test. The spaceship shuddered to a halt. An astronaut, Vicky, fell out of her seat, shouting, Oh, no. This sentence uses speech Marks to show what Vicky said. Speech Marks. Also known as inverted commas. Let's look again at the sentence. The spaceship shuddered to a halt, and astronaut Vicky fell out of her seat, shouting, Oh, no. You use a comma to separate what's being said from the rest of the sentence. Two speech Marks are used to show when Vicki started speaking, also called direct speech. A capital letter is used to start direct speech at the end, the punctuation goes inside the speech Marks, and what's being said is finished with closing speech Marks. Let's look at that again. A comma separates what's being said from the rest of the sentence. Use speech Marks at the start and end of your speech. A capital letter begins the sentence at the end. You can use either an exclamation mark, question mark, or full stop, but put it inside the speech Marks. Mission control came over the radio. Watch out for the space junk in your sector. Let's punctuate the speech in this sentence. Add a comma, opening speech Marks, a capital letter, exclamation mark, and closing speech Marks. Here's another. Vicki looked out at the window and said, we just crashed into it. Add a comma, opening speech Marks, a capital letter, a full stop and closing speech Marks. The captain asked, is there any damage? For this sentence, use ser comma opening speech Marks, capital letter, question mark and closing speech Marks. The. Which sentence is punctuated in the right way? Which one? What? Good. Vicki looked at the ship and replied, not much, just a few scratches. You've been learning about speech Marks. Speech Marks are used to show what somebody is saying. Use them at the start and the end of the speech. Use a comma to separate what's being said from the rest of your sentence. Start the speech with a capital letter, and your end punctuation goes inside the closing speech Marks. And that's how you use speech Marks. Okay. Right? Okay. Another thing we need to remember, Aiden, is this is often something we often forget. So used to forget is when we have a new speaker or a speaker that's different to the one before we go on to a new line to make it really clear for the reader that a new person is speaking basically. So if you can see here, we're putting it on a new line underneath every time a different goat is speaking. I think we need to just have a go and do some writing, to be honest. Where is the worksheets? Okay, let's have a go at this. Speaker, what is this ask to do? So it says, decide whether the following are examples of direct or indirecspeech. So don't me to remind you what the difference is. So it's caa less me to find what's difference. So I should remind you, we did talk about the difference between direct and indirect, but we'll go back over. So reported is also called indirect. This is when we have speech that doesn't need punctuation Marks, doesn't need speech Marks. Yeah like this, the goat said that they wanted to eat the Green grass. Direct speech does need speech Marks. You know the goat said like. The goat said, get off my bridge, you know, using those speech Marks that is direct. So direct needs speech Marks, indirect does not need speech Marks. Perfect. Well done. This time you need to add in the punctuation that's missing for these speech. You need to add in into all of the sentences. You need to add in speech Marks into all of the sentences aiand not just two of them. 我。So, ada, make sure you actually read the sentence. I want sweets, shouted the little girl as she ran into the shop. It's not she's not just saying all of this. You need to look at it a bit more carefully, Aiden. Oh, Yeah. Yeah, that's better. What have you forgot in number two, remember to introduce the speech. What do you need to show the features coming here? Good. Please can you help me my mawork after moving quietly? Well, we have to get there, okay? And have a look at this one at the bottom one again for me. When we ever get there, one Young child, yes, that's better. Well, don't make sure you're actually carefully looking where the speech is ending. Don't just assume it's the whole sentence here. But. We will finish on this. So one more, one more, can you write just one sentence using direct speech? Follow. I'm not scary at all, says Marcy. Okay, good. Just I'm not scared at all here. And the the strophe in I'm goes there, which we're going to be looking at next. So that's good. So I'm not scared at all, says Marcy. Yeah, okay, good. Right. Well done. Asieli'm going to get you to do some more speech writing for your homework tasks as well. Okay, so I'll give you a little work sheyou to do some more. Please stop that. I'm wasn't trying to write some more speech things. Okay. Okay, thank you. Adyou worked super hard today. Really good answers. Yams, I'm writing. I'll see you next week again. Enjoy the rescue day. Bye bye.
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    "course_title_en": "Language Course Summary",
    "course_title_cn": "语言课程总结",
    "course_subtitle_en": "1v1 English Lesson - Punctuation Review (Commas and Direct Speech)",
    "course_subtitle_cn": "1v1 英语课程 - 标点符号复习(逗号和直接引语)",
    "course_name_en": "GW Foundation Aiden",
    "course_name_cn": "GW基础课程",
    "course_topic_en": "Punctuation Review: Commas and Direct Speech",
    "course_topic_cn": "标点符号复习:逗号和直接引语",
    "course_date_en": "January 6th",
    "course_date_cn": "1月6日",
    "student_name": "Aiden",
    "teaching_focus_en": "Reviewing the use of commas (separating clauses, contrast, dates\/years) and introducing the rules for direct speech punctuation (inverted commas, capitalization, internal punctuation).",
    "teaching_focus_cn": "复习逗号的用法(分隔从句、表达对比、日期\/年份)并介绍直接引语的标点规则(引号、大写、内部标点)。",
    "teaching_objectives": [
        {
            "en": "Review and correctly apply the rules for using commas between main and subordinate clauses.",
            "cn": "复习并正确应用主句和从句之间逗号的使用规则。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Understand and practice punctuating direct speech using inverted commas, capitalization, and internal punctuation rules.",
            "cn": "理解并练习使用引号、大写和内部标点规则来标点直接引语。"
        }
    ],
    "timeline_activities": [
        {
            "time": "Initial 5 mins",
            "title_en": "Casual Conversation & Break Catch-up",
            "title_cn": "日常对话与假期回顾",
            "description_en": "Checking in with the student about their Christmas break, specifically snowboarding.",
            "description_cn": "与学生交流圣诞假期情况,特别是关于滑雪的经历。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Correction\/Review",
            "title_en": "Review of Previous Writing Task",
            "title_cn": "前一次写作任务批改",
            "description_en": "Reviewing a narrative text, focusing on correcting capitalization and punctuation errors, noting that the student unnecessarily changed some wording.",
            "description_cn": "批改一篇叙事文本,重点关注大写和标点错误,指出学生不必要地修改了部分措辞。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Main Focus 1",
            "title_en": "Comma Usage Review (Clauses & Contrast)",
            "title_cn": "逗号用法复习(从句与对比)",
            "description_en": "Reviewed comma use for separating main\/subordinate clauses (subordinate clause first) and separating contrasting elements. Student practiced inserting commas.",
            "description_cn": "复习了逗号用于分隔主从句(从句在前)和分隔对比元素的用法。学生进行了插入逗号的练习。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Main Focus 2",
            "title_en": "Comma Usage Review (Dates\/Years)",
            "title_cn": "逗号用法复习(日期\/年份)",
            "description_en": "Reviewed using commas to separate locations (city\/country) or dates\/years. Checked student's understanding against examples.",
            "description_cn": "复习了使用逗号分隔地点(城市\/国家)或日期\/年份的用法。通过示例检验了学生的理解。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Main Focus 3",
            "title_en": "Introduction to Direct Speech Punctuation",
            "title_cn": "直接引语标点介绍",
            "description_en": "Introduced reported (indirect) vs. direct speech. Detailed rules for direct speech: inverted commas, capitalization, internal punctuation (comma\/period\/exclamation\/question marks), and new line for new speaker.",
            "description_cn": "介绍了转述(间接)引语与直接引语的区别。详细讲解了直接引语的规则:引号、大写、内部标点(逗号\/句号\/感叹号\/问号),以及新说话人换行。"
        },
        {
            "time": "Practice & Wrap-up",
            "title_en": "Direct\/Indirect Speech Identification & Practice",
            "title_cn": "直接\/间接引语识别与练习",
            "description_en": "Student identified examples, practiced adding missing punctuation to direct speech sentences, and wrote one original sentence using direct speech.",
            "description_cn": "学生识别了示例,练习为直接引语句子添加缺失的标点,并写了一个使用直接引语的原创句子。"
        }
    ],
    "vocabulary_en": "snowboarding, subordinate clause, main clause, parenthesis, contrast, direct speech, indirect speech, inverted commas, exclamation mark, question mark, full stop, apostrophe",
    "vocabulary_cn": "滑雪,从属子句,主句,括号,对比,直接引语,间接引语,引号,感叹号,问号,句号,撇号",
    "concepts_en": "Comma rules (separating clauses, contrast, dates), Direct Speech Punctuation Mechanics (inverted commas, capitalization, internal punctuation, new line conventions).",
    "concepts_cn": "逗号规则(分隔从句、对比、日期),直接引语标点机制(引号、大写、内部标点、换行惯例)。",
    "skills_practiced_en": "Reading comprehension (following complex punctuation rules), Sentence structuring, Written punctuation accuracy, Identifying direct vs. indirect speech.",
    "skills_practiced_cn": "阅读理解(遵循复杂的标点规则),句子结构,书面标点准确性,识别直接引语与间接引语的区别。",
    "teaching_resources": [
        {
            "en": "Textbook\/worksheet examples on comma usage.",
            "cn": "关于逗号用法的课本\/练习册示例。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Video demonstration on punctuating direct speech (Astronaut Vicky example).",
            "cn": "关于直接引语标点的视频演示(宇航员Vicky示例)。"
        }
    ],
    "participation_assessment": [
        {
            "en": "Good active participation, especially during the practice drills for comma placement.",
            "cn": "参与度良好且积极,尤其是在逗号放置的练习环节中。"
        }
    ],
    "comprehension_assessment": [
        {
            "en": "Strong understanding of the difference between main and subordinate clauses. Comprehension of direct speech rules was high after the video aid.",
            "cn": "对主句和从句的区别理解深刻。在视频辅助后,对直接引语规则的理解度很高。"
        }
    ],
    "oral_assessment": [
        {
            "en": "Fluent conversational responses during the initial check-in. Clear articulation when reading example sentences.",
            "cn": "在初始交流环节回答流利。朗读例句时发音清晰。"
        }
    ],
    "written_assessment_en": "Inconsistent application of the new punctuation rules during independent writing tasks, showing initial difficulty remembering all components (e.g., forgetting commas before quotation marks when reporting speech).",
    "written_assessment_cn": "在独立写作任务中,新标点规则的应用不一致,表现出初期对所有组成部分(如报告引语时忘记引号前的逗号)的记忆困难。",
    "student_strengths": [
        {
            "en": "Quick recall of the definition distinguishing main vs. subordinate clauses.",
            "cn": "快速回忆起区分主句和从句的定义。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Successfully wrote one accurate original sentence using direct speech by the end of the lesson.",
            "cn": "在课程结束时成功写出了一句使用直接引语的原创句子。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Good attention to detail when correcting initial writing errors (e.g., capitalization).",
            "cn": "在修改初始写作错误(如大写)时表现出良好的细节关注度。"
        }
    ],
    "improvement_areas": [
        {
            "en": "Maintaining consistency when applying multiple new punctuation rules simultaneously (e.g., direct speech requires comma + quote + capital letter).",
            "cn": "在同时应用多项新标点规则时保持一致性(例如,直接引语要求逗号+引号+大写字母)。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Carefully reading instructions for punctuation tasks rather than assuming the scope of the speech segment.",
            "cn": "仔细阅读标点任务的说明,而不是假设引语部分的范围。"
        }
    ],
    "teaching_effectiveness": [
        {
            "en": "The review structure, moving from known comma rules to new direct speech rules, was logical and supportive.",
            "cn": "教学结构合理且具有支持性,从已知的逗号规则过渡到新的直接引语规则。"
        }
    ],
    "pace_management": [
        {
            "en": "The pace was appropriate, allowing sufficient time for video review and multiple practice attempts on comma placement.",
            "cn": "课堂节奏恰当,为视频回顾和多次逗号放置练习提供了充足的时间。"
        }
    ],
    "classroom_atmosphere_en": "Positive, focused, and interactive, with the teacher providing immediate, specific feedback.",
    "classroom_atmosphere_cn": "积极、专注且互动性强,教师提供了即时、具体的反馈。",
    "objective_achievement": [
        {
            "en": "Partially achieved. Comma rules were reviewed successfully; direct speech punctuation requires consolidation through practice.",
            "cn": "部分达成。逗号规则得到成功复习;直接引语标点需要通过练习来巩固。"
        }
    ],
    "teaching_strengths": {
        "identified_strengths": [
            {
                "en": "Effective use of a video resource to clearly illustrate the multi-step process of punctuating direct speech.",
                "cn": "有效利用视频资源,清晰地展示了标点直接引语的多步骤过程。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Clear distinction between reported speech (indirect) and direct speech.",
                "cn": "清晰地区分了转述引语(间接)和直接引语。"
            }
        ],
        "effective_methods": [
            {
                "en": "Checking prior knowledge before introducing new concepts (main vs. subordinate clauses).",
                "cn": "在引入新概念(主句与从句)之前检查先有知识。"
            },
            {
                "en": "Requiring the student to write an original sentence to demonstrate mastery of direct speech.",
                "cn": "要求学生写一个原创句子来展示对直接引语的掌握。"
            }
        ],
        "positive_feedback": [
            {
                "en": "Teacher praised the student's quick grasp of the main\/subordinate clause distinction.",
                "cn": "老师表扬了学生对主句\/从句区别的快速掌握。"
            }
        ]
    },
    "specific_suggestions": [
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-volume-up",
            "category_en": "Pronunciation & Reading",
            "category_cn": "发音与阅读",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Continue reading aloud to internalize the natural pauses indicated by commas in complex sentences.",
                    "cn": "继续大声朗读,以内化复杂句子中标点符号所指示的自然停顿。"
                }
            ]
        },
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-comments",
            "category_en": "Speaking & Communication",
            "category_cn": "口语与交流",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Practice saying sentences containing direct speech aloud to connect the written punctuation with spoken pauses.",
                    "cn": "练习大声说出包含直接引语的句子,将书面标点与口语停顿联系起来。"
                }
            ]
        },
        {
            "icon": "fas fa-pencil-alt",
            "category_en": "Grammar & Mechanics",
            "category_cn": "语法与规范",
            "suggestions": [
                {
                    "en": "Create a checklist card for direct speech punctuation: 1. Comma before speech (if 'said' follows) 2. Open Inverted Comma 3. Capital Letter 4. End Punctuation (inside quotes) 5. Closing Inverted Comma.",
                    "cn": "创建一张直接引语标点的检查清单卡:1. 引语前加逗号(如果'said'跟在后面)2. 开放引号 3. 大写字母 4. 结束标点(在引号内)5. 闭合引号。"
                }
            ]
        }
    ],
    "next_focus": [
        {
            "en": "Consolidation of Direct Speech Punctuation (focusing on placement of commas when 'said' precedes or follows the speech).",
            "cn": "巩固直接引语标点(重点关注'said'位于引语前或后的逗号位置)。"
        },
        {
            "en": "Introduction to Apostrophes for possession and contractions (as hinted at by the final sentence correction).",
            "cn": "介绍用于表示所有格和缩写的撇号(如最后一句的修改所暗示的)。"
        }
    ],
    "homework_resources": [
        {
            "en": "Complete the provided worksheet focusing on adding punctuation to direct speech sentences.",
            "cn": "完成提供的练习表,重点是为直接引语句子添加标点符号。"
        }
    ]
}
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