Sorry, I can't hear you. I can't hear you for some reason. Can you hear me now? Yeah okay, brilliant. Oh en was just on where to go. There we. Go, does your camera work Briya? Yeah. We also switched on computers, so like today bualso like gonna be like right here, okay, this says his camera doesn't work. You guys want to just be on one screen, okay okay. Happy New Year. Merry Christmas. How are you guys? Amazing. I'm good. So I got the schedule for January. And from the schedule, it looks like this is our last lesson. Is that is that right? I think so. Okay. Well, it's been amazing working with you guys. I'll talk to my people because I didn't know that. But the when is the exam? I don't know, really sure. It's just like I think it's just like another like for like I see example. Okay, okay, cool, cool, cool. Anyway, today we're going to do some more essay prep. How does that sound? This sounds good. Sounds good. Okay. So if you remember a few weeks ago, what we did is I had you guys write a practice essay and then we kind of went over them together. And today it's going to be A A similar thing. But we're really focusing last time, we really made sure that it made sense cohesively, and this time we're really focusing on making sure that each paragraph has a point and then it flows necessarily that you're not like wasting space, sound good. Okay, so we're going to spend 30 minutes writing out of each essay from one of the prompts listed. You guys can not do the same prompts that you did last time. Sharing a computer might be a little difficult to type it out, but also might be good to practice handwriting it. So what we're gonna to do is we're gonna, you guys are going to handwrite the essays for 30 minutes and then we'll go through you'll read it aloud and we'll add this well, like really list the purpose the so what for each paragraph, okay, each paragraph should have its own specific so what right? So let's try to think of some examples of what like a good sowhat for a paragraph would be. So one is to introduce a new idea. What's another one you guys can think of? Maybe they say why that idea is important. Explain why it's important. What's another reason? What things support the idea. That's kind of explaining why it's important, right? But maybe to give a specific example or evidence, Yeah. Okay, what's another? What's another? So what maybe. Maybe contrast it with another idea. What's another? Do one more. Maybe an example of how it can be important like in a situation. Yeah Yeah, Yeah. So maybe like looking to like like an opportunity for application. Yeah, one more I lied. Maybe we could also compare it with a different idea. Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, you can compare it with a similar idea. Fantastic these all either work to support your argument or to introduce a new argument, right? But the idea is that you don't want each paragraph and an essay to have the same. So what if each paragraph is just, this is good because I like it. I like it because it's good. You're not really saying anything, right? If you're saying paragraph one, yellow is the best color. Yellow is the best color because it's the same color as the sun. Yellow is the best color because it is really bright and warm. Yellow is the best color because it makes me happy, right? Those are all different. So what's. Okay. So we did what prompted we do last time. We said traveling back in time. So you guys aren't allowed to do that one this time because that would be cheating. What essay do you feel like you want to write? I. Would want to do what career are you interested in? Okay, fantastic. What do you think, Balen? What do you want? I'm probably going to do who someone had a significant impact on the. Fantastic. Okay. Do you guys have a pen and paper? Yeah, okay, because in the exam you're going to have to write on a piece of paper, so I'm going to set a timer for 30 minutes and you guys are going to write this essay, okay? Ready, all. Where' S Baldwin? Ready? Set go. 15 minutes left. One minute left. All right, guys, time's up. Okay, so why don't we have one of you? We'll take turns. We'll each take a turn reading the essays out loud and then we'll go through after both of them are read and list the so what for each paragraph. Okay, so it wants to go first. I'll go first. Okay, fantastic. There's one person in the world who definitely stands out against the crowd for someone who impacts my life greatly, and that person is none other than my mom. The impact my mom has made on me in very strong in many ways. The first one being that he always encourages me no matter the challenge, no matter the obstacles. She believes in me and encourages me so much that I definitely get through anything. Another impact is that she is very smart. She always tries to find the best solution towards something, no matter how much time it could take, and she always helps me to see which solution could be the best. For example, when she was helping me set up my computer, it took a long time, but she found the smarter solution to fix the account settings, and I succeeded. These impacts are also important for me, because they all show that she wants me to be happy and she cares about me and loves me, which is totally the reason they have such a big impact on me. All in all, my mom is a person with a significant impact on my life, and she asked her endurance, caring and love, which definitely makes me the most important person in the world to. Hey, thank you. Brian, why don't you read your essay? Careers can be many things, such as an author, an engineer, inventor, etcetera. There are endless possibilities that you can choose. But if I had to choose an opening, it would be AI creation, because it's interesting and I can learn. I think air creation is very interesting. Not only does that growth on information need give you, or also create ates some thoughts and can find solutions to complex problems that people give me. And possibilities are endless with to me, I find AI creation very interesting. If I have an air creation for a job, I would have knowledge on prompts to give it, so it could generate the best answers to my question. I would not to ask for the highest quality answers or suggestions it would give me so and so that would. Me and needed and I feel like I could get a lot of it. Don't know overall, it would I would choose if I would choose anything, it would be AI creation because it's interesting and I could learn a lot from it. Hey, cool. Thank you. Okay, so now let's go through and we'll read each paragraph individually and then pull out what the what the purpose of it is, what the so what is okay? So let's start with you Ryan ball win. Sorry. Wait, so we're supposed to try to take out the so watts and saw the essay. So we're going to read each paragraph out loud and then we're going to decide, we're going to pick out what the, so what what the purpose of that paragraph is. So I don't you read the first paragraph. There's one person in the world who definitely stands out against the crowd and someone who impacts my life greatly. And that person is none older than my mom. Okay. So what's the so of that paragraph? So. What's the purpose of the paragraph? What do we think to show that my mom is a person with a very big impact on my life? Yeah, it's introducing the argument, right? Okay. What's the next paragraph? The impact of my mom, her lonme, was very strong in many ways. The first one being that she always encourages me. And no matter the challenge, no matter the obstacles, she believes in me and encourages me so much I can definitely get through anything. Okay, so what's the in one sentence, how would you what's the purpose of that paragraph? The purpose of the paragraph is to explain one impact that she had on my life that really was important to me. What's that impact that she always encourayeah? So it's giving a reason. The reason that my mom is someone who has a significant impact on my life is that she encourages me. What's the next paragraph? The next paragraph is another impact that she's very small. He always tried to find the best solution towards something, no matter how much time it could take. And she always helps me to see which solution could be. For example, when fehelping and set up the computer took a lot of time, but she found the smartest solution to fix the count settings and succeeded. So what's the, what's the soa? The soa is that she is very smart and she cares a lot about what I'm doing. So what's the purpose of that for the essay? It's to have another supporting reason of how she has a baby pepper. Yep. It's giving another reason why she's has had a significant impact. It's because she's very smart. Okay? What's the next paragraph? Paragraph? These impacts are all so important to me because they show that she wants me to be happy and she cares about me and loves me, which is wholly the reason they have suof. So what's the so what is that? It's explaining why the two impacts are really important and how they debate modern life. Can you reread the paragraph? Yeah these impacts are also important to me because they all show that she wants me to be happy and that she cares about me and loves me, which is only the reason they have such a big impact at on me. Okay, so we're tying it back to we're tying it back to the prompt, right? We're describing why this impact is important. Right and the next Yeah. And the last one is, all in all, my mom is a person with a significant impact on my life. She has endused caring and love, which definitely looks to the most important person in the world to me. So what's what's the purpose of that paragraph? The purpose of the paragraph is to kind of wrap up the cup and kind of like explain everything that the impacts that she does for me and how it makes her the most important person. Yeah, it's the conclusion. We're restating the argument and we're going over the reasons, right? Okay. Thank you, Brian. Your turn. Can you read the first paragraph? Careriers can read many things, such as an author, an engineer, a bank teller, etcetera. There are endless possibilities that you can choose. But if I had to choose a career, it would be AI creation news because it's interesting and I can learn a lot. Okay, so what's the purpose? The purpose is seeing that I would choose ad creation for a career. What's what's your first paragraph? It's I think ation is very interesting. Not only does it grow from information you give, it also can create its own can find to complex problems. My people give them and the possibilities were endless to me. I find AI creation very interesting. So what's your what's your one sentence so what my soul up part this paragraph is AI creation is very interesting because they can learn from information between creown thoughts. Okay. So if you're interested in it as a career, because you find the field interesting. Right, always take it back to what the always try to take it back to what the essay is asking of you, right? Okay, what's your next paragraph? If I have information for a job, I have the knowledge on prompts. They give it so it could generate the best answers to my question. I would know how to ask what the highest quality answers or suggestions it can give it. And this is why my skills could be good for area creation. So I have two questions. One is what the so what is and what are the skills that you're? What is the so that is trying to answer the second part of the question, right? What skills do you have that would make you succeed in your career, right? Okay. So what are the skills that you're talking about here? The knowledge for big prompts. Okay, so what's the so what of this paragraph? So what is that? I have the knowledge of proto, give it in AI. So I would be a great person to be in AI creation as a job. So what's the how does this how does this paragraph, that specific purpose differ from the previous paragraph? Like it condenses it a little bit more. It differs because. This this paragraph is for like my skills and knowledge for AI and the one before is that AI can create its own thoughts. Okay, so your first paragraph is I'm interested in AI creation is what I want to do and I would be good at it because I'm good at this. Yeah. Okay. What's your next paragraph? My last paragraph is overall, I would choose, if I could choose any career, it would be AI creation because it is interesting and I could learn a lot from it. So what is that? What is that? It's saying that. That the a creation to me is interesting and I can learn well from you and I would choose that over a lot of other careers. You're restating the point is to the so what is to is a conclusion, right? Okay, thank you. So for the last five minutes, we're going to go over another one and we're going kind of pull out. Do you know how we do you remember how we used to do? We used to do a few months ago, we went over kind of outlining essays. So for the last few minutes, we're going to pick another essay that we haven't written anything on and we're going to just outline it with the so what for each paragraph, right? Okay, so do you want to do what is a problem facing your community or describe a time where you overcame a challenge? Let's do let's do the first one because that one's a little bit more general. Okay? Okay. So what's a what's the problem what's the problem facing our community that we're going to solve? There's a lot of like smoke, I guess, and like some pollution bowin, what do you think I'm thinking that we could instead of like littering plastic and things into the ocean because they take a long time to decompose, we can instead reuse them many times for different things instead. Okay, let's well, let's let's pick one problem to write this essay on. So what do we want to go with litter? Do we want to go with pollution? Let's go polpollution, okay, what's the solution then that we're going to propose? Now the solution could be like stop like maybe stop burning like fossil fuels and just use like like solar electricity maybe. Okay. Bom, what do you think I'm thinking? Maybe we could instead like. It's like kind of like what Brian said about the fossil fields. It's like efficient, but it's not that healthy. It's not healthy. Flaso. You could instead of using fossil bills, solar energy would be a good thing. So I agree with Brian. Okay. So our solution is going to be reduced fossil fuel, right? So then let's go through and we have remember the format. We went through introduction, body paragraph one, body paragraph two. Body paragraph three and conclusion, right. Okay. So what's the soa of our intro? The solar of the ino is. Saying that if we want to stop pollution, we could reduce more fossil fuels. Yeah. So we're going to state the problem and the solution. So problem is pollution solution is reducing use of fossil fuels. What's body paragraph one? One is cating all the problems that possible fuels due to the earth maybe. Do you agree, Brian? Yeah. Okay. So body paragraph one, we're going to explain why also ssifuels cause pollution and why we think that their use. Should be reduced, right? Yeah. Okay. Brody, paragraph two. Bone, what do you think broparagraph could be introducing a new solution is introducing a solution which could be like introducing solar energy and what solar energy could do. Okay? So we're going to propose a solution, right? So this will. Okay, what's potty? Paragraph three, then. At the be saying what benefits we could create from region solar entity instead of fossil use. Well, isn't that or we can also do something like compare and contrasting soil energy and fossil Yeah because that's what the purpose of the second paragraph is, is we're proposing we've established a problem, we're proposing our solution and we've kind of explained why this is a good solution. So we need to support that, right? Because the idea is to reduce pollution, right? So we're going to explain and we're going to use evidence to support. So then what's our conclusion going to be? Energy is better than and to pollution. We need to reduce fossil tools. Alen, what do you think? Yeah, I think we could I agree with Brian for like we could say that. Like. Would you like say solar energy is more effective than fossil fuels and healthier flow the earth because fossil fuels is not healthy? Saying it, right? So remember that we have this challenge, right? And the entire thing, the purpose of this essay is to argue for a minimization of pollution, right? Yeah. So let's frame it in pollution. So solar energy produces less pollution then fossil fuels, and thus will be necessary to reduce. Overall pollutants. Does that make sense? Do you get do you get why that's like slightly different? Yeah, okay. Fantastic job, guys. That is all the time that we have. Good luck. Bye.