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"header_icon": "fas fa-crown",
"course_title_en": "Language Course Summary",
"course_title_cn": "语言课程总结",
"course_subtitle_en": "1v1 English Lesson - PL Writing SC G1",
"course_subtitle_cn": "1v1 英语课程 - PL 写作 SC G1",
"course_name_en": "PL Writing SC G1",
"course_name_cn": "PL 写作 SC G1",
"course_topic_en": "Features of Explanation Texts and Sentence Improvement",
"course_topic_cn": "说明文的特点及句子改进",
"course_date_en": "Date not specified, Lesson 3",
"course_date_cn": "日期未明确,第三课",
"student_name": "Ian, Shany, Carlo, Evan (Group setting implied)",
"teaching_focus_en": "Reviewing features of instruction texts and explanation texts; practicing the use of causal conjunctions, time conjunctions\/adverbials, and technical vocabulary to improve instructional sentences.",
"teaching_focus_cn": "复习说明文和指示文的特点;练习使用因果连词、时间连词\/副词和技术词汇来改进指示性句子。",
"teaching_objectives": [
{
"en": "Use causal conjunctions and adverbials.",
"cn": "使用因果连词和副词。"
},
{
"en": "Use technical vocabulary.",
"cn": "使用技术词汇。"
},
{
"en": "Use time conjunctions and adverbials features of an explanation text.",
"cn": "使用说明文的时间连词和副词特征。"
}
],
"timeline_activities": [
{
"time": "Start",
"title_en": "Video Introduction (Space Food\/Drink)",
"title_cn": "视频引入(太空食物\/饮品)",
"description_en": "Watched a short video about making coffee\/drinking liquid in space, linking to the theme.",
"description_cn": "观看了关于在太空中制作咖啡\/饮用液体的短片,与主题相关联。"
},
{
"time": "Review",
"title_en": "Reviewing Instruction Text Features",
"title_cn": "复习指示文的特点",
"description_en": "Students recalled and confirmed the features of an instruction text (e.g., chronological order, no question title, advice in conclusion).",
"description_cn": "学生回忆并确认了指示文的特点(例如,按时间顺序、无疑问句标题、结论中有建议)。"
},
{
"time": "Focus",
"title_en": "Defining Explanation Text Features",
"title_cn": "界定说明文的特点",
"description_en": "Detailed review of explanation text features: question as a title, introduction, causal\/time conjunctions, technical vocabulary, diagrams, summary, and use of present tense.",
"description_cn": "详细回顾了说明文的特点:疑问句标题、引言、因果\/时间连词、技术词汇、图表、总结和现在时态的使用。"
},
{
"time": "Activity",
"title_en": "Analyzing 'How to Make a Cup of Tea' (Instructional Text)",
"title_cn": "分析‘如何泡一杯茶’(指示文)",
"description_en": "Students read the instructional text step-by-step and confirmed it is an instruction text, not an explanation text.",
"description_cn": "学生分步阅读了指示文,并确认这是一篇指示文而不是说明文。"
},
{
"time": "Practice",
"title_en": "Sentence Improvement Practice (Time\/Causal Conjunctions)",
"title_cn": "句子改进练习(时间\/因果连词)",
"description_en": "Practiced rewriting vague\/informal sentences by integrating time conjunctions (e.g., first, afterwards) and causal conjunctions (e.g., as a result, consequently).",
"description_cn": "练习通过整合时间连词(如 first, afterwards)和因果连词(如 as a result, consequently)来重写模糊\/非正式的句子。"
},
{
"time": "Vocabulary",
"title_en": "Technical Vocabulary Application",
"title_cn": "技术词汇应用",
"description_en": "Students reviewed a technical word mat and practiced using target vocabulary (e.g., claw) in sentences.",
"description_cn": "学生复习了技术词汇表,并练习在句子中使用目标词汇(例如 claw)。"
},
{
"time": "Wrap-up",
"title_en": "Formalizing Instructional Steps",
"title_cn": "规范化指示步骤",
"description_en": "Group activity to transform the simple instructions for making tea into more formal sentences using technical vocabulary and appropriate conjunctions.",
"description_cn": "小组活动,利用技术词汇和恰当的连词将泡茶的简单指示转化为更正式的句子。"
}
],
"vocabulary_en": "Kettle, tea bags, biscuit, piston, conveyor belt, pad, claw, automatic, consequently, afterwards, consequently, subsequently, due to, since.",
"vocabulary_cn": "水壶,茶包,饼干,活塞,传送带,垫子,爪子,自动的,因此,之后,因此,随后,由于,因为。",
"concepts_en": "Instruction Text Features vs. Explanation Text Features, Causal Conjunctions\/Adverbials, Time Conjunctions\/Adverbials, Technical Vocabulary.",
"concepts_cn": "指示文特点与说明文特点对比,因果连词\/副词,时间连词\/副词,技术词汇。",
"skills_practiced_en": "Reading comprehension (text type identification), Speaking (answering recall questions, sentence construction), Writing (sentence formalization and improvement).",
"skills_practiced_cn": "阅读理解(文本类型识别),口语(回答回顾性问题,句子构建),写作(句子正式化和改进)。",
"teaching_resources": [
{
"en": "Video demonstration on brewing coffee\/drinking in space.",
"cn": "关于在太空中冲泡咖啡\/饮水的视频演示。"
},
{
"en": "Activity Sheet: How to make a cup of tea (Instructional Text).",
"cn": "活动单:如何泡一杯茶(指示文)。"
},
{
"en": "Technical Vocabulary Word Mat.",
"cn": "技术词汇表。"
}
],
"participation_assessment": [
{
"en": "Students (Ian, Shany, Carlo, Evan) actively participated in the whole-class Q&A sessions regarding text features.",
"cn": "学生(Ian, Shany, Carlo, Evan)积极参与了关于文本特点的全班问答环节。"
},
{
"en": "High engagement during group sentence refinement activities, with students offering multiple suggestions for improvement.",
"cn": "在小组句子改进活动中参与度很高,学生们提出了多种改进建议。"
}
],
"comprehension_assessment": [
{
"en": "Students successfully differentiated between instruction texts and explanation texts based on structural features.",
"cn": "学生们能够根据结构特点成功区分指示文和说明文。"
},
{
"en": "Students demonstrated understanding of the function of time and causal conjunctions when asked to rewrite sentences.",
"cn": "学生在被要求重写句子时,展现了对时间连词和因果连词功能的理解。"
}
],
"oral_assessment": [
{
"en": "Speaking was generally clear, although some hesitation was noted when generating complex sentences spontaneously.",
"cn": "口语总体清晰,但在自发生成复杂句子时记录到了一些犹豫。"
},
{
"en": "Good recall of required grammatical terms (e.g., conjunctions, adverbials) during discussion.",
"cn": "在讨论中能很好地回忆起所需的语法术语(例如,连词、副词)。"
}
],
"written_assessment_en": "N\/A (Focus was primarily on oral manipulation and collaborative sentence building).",
"written_assessment_cn": "不适用(重点主要在于口头操作和协作性句子构建)。",
"student_strengths": [
{
"en": "Strong recall of grammatical terms and text features.",
"cn": "对语法术语和文本特征的记忆力很强。"
},
{
"en": "Quickly grasping how to integrate conjunctions into existing sentence structures during practice.",
"cn": "在练习中能快速掌握如何将连词整合到现有句子结构中。"
},
{
"en": "Willingness to attempt defining and using technical vocabulary.",
"cn": "愿意尝试定义和使用技术词汇。"
}
],
"improvement_areas": [
{
"en": "Need for more precision when selecting the *most* appropriate technical vocabulary from the word mat.",
"cn": "在词汇表上选择*最*合适的专业技术词汇时需要更精确。"
},
{
"en": "Ensuring that vague terms (like 'thingy', 'big block') are fully replaced in formal writing.",
"cn": "确保在正式写作中完全替换掉模糊的术语(如 'thingy', 'big block')。"
}
],
"teaching_effectiveness": [
{
"en": "The review of instruction text features effectively set the stage for contrasting them with explanation text features.",
"cn": "对指示文特点的复习有效地为与说明文特点的对比奠定了基础。"
},
{
"en": "The comparison and subsequent sentence improvement exercise directly targeted the lesson objectives.",
"cn": "比较和随后的句子改进练习直接针对了课程目标。"
}
],
"pace_management": [
{
"en": "The pace was appropriate for a detailed review and practice session.",
"cn": "节奏适合进行详细的复习和练习环节。"
},
{
"en": "The teacher managed time well by deciding to use the remaining 10 minutes for collaborative homework review instead of starting the next topic.",
"cn": "老师通过决定利用剩余的10分钟进行协作式作业复习而不是开始下一个主题,很好地管理了时间。"
}
],
"classroom_atmosphere_en": "Engaged, focused, and collaborative, with the teacher effectively handling a minor technical disconnection.",
"classroom_atmosphere_cn": "投入、专注且具有协作性,老师有效地处理了一次轻微的技术中断。",
"objective_achievement": [
{
"en": "All primary objectives relating to conjunctions, technical vocabulary, and text features were addressed and practiced.",
"cn": "所有与连词、技术词汇和文本特征相关的主要目标都得到了解决和练习。"
}
],
"teaching_strengths": {
"identified_strengths": [
{
"en": "Clear scaffolding provided by contrasting instruction text features against explanation text features.",
"cn": "通过对比指示文和说明文的特点,提供了清晰的支架式教学。"
}
],
"effective_methods": [
{
"en": "Using a flawed\/vague sentence ('The thingy starts off by crashing...') as a concrete starting point for complex sentence rewriting.",
"cn": "使用一个有缺陷\/模糊的句子('The thingy starts off by crashing...')作为复杂句子重写的具体起点。"
},
{
"en": "Integrating the homework review into the live lesson time due to surplus time, ensuring immediate reinforcement.",
"cn": "由于时间充裕,将作业复习整合到实时课程时间中,确保了即时巩固。"
}
],
"positive_feedback": [
{
"en": "Students provided excellent alternative phrasing during the sentence formalization activity.",
"cn": "学生在句子正式化活动中提供了出色的替代措辞。"
}
]
},
"specific_suggestions": [
{
"icon": "fas fa-comments",
"category_en": "Speaking & Communication",
"category_cn": "口语与交流",
"suggestions": [
{
"en": "Encourage students to self-correct their use of technical vocabulary by referring back to the word mat more independently before seeking confirmation.",
"cn": "鼓励学生在寻求确认之前更独立地参考词汇表,以自我修正他们对技术词汇的使用。"
}
]
},
{
"icon": "fas fa-pencil-alt",
"category_en": "Writing Structure & Precision",
"category_cn": "写作结构与精确性",
"suggestions": [
{
"en": "When improving sentences, explicitly label which element (Time Conjunction, Causal Conjunction, Technical Term) is being added to ensure all required elements are targeted.",
"cn": "在改进句子时,明确标记所添加的元素(时间连词、因果连词、技术术语),以确保所有要求的要素都被纳入。"
}
]
}
],
"next_focus": [
{
"en": "Designing a machine to make a meal for Tim Peake (linking back to the space theme and requiring application of instruction\/explanation writing skills).",
"cn": "设计一台为 Tim Peake 制作餐点的机器(与太空主题挂钩,需要应用指示文\/说明文的写作技巧)。"
}
],
"homework_resources": [
{
"en": "Find one example of an explanation text and one example of an instruction text; be prepared to share and discuss their features next lesson.",
"cn": "找到一个说明文的例子和一个指示文的例子;准备在下节课分享并讨论它们的特点。"
}
]
}